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Tim
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0 posted 2002-06-03 10:54 PM



From my slumber I awoke,
To unseen voices as they spoke,
Softly calling out my name,
Knowing not from whence they came.

Peering through the dark and gloom,
Shadowed void of empty room,
Seeking, searching, no one's there,
Cold and lifeless lays the air.

No more the voices beckon me,
Silence reigns, I cannot see,
No visions lay within my sight,
For I fail to see the night.

Voices calling out my name,
Never knowing whence they came.

© Copyright 2002 Tim - All Rights Reserved
Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-06-03 10:57 PM



Shhh....we're calling, lucky that
you're listening...shhhh

Suetang
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2 posted 2002-06-03 11:13 PM


Hello Tim

I really liked this and could relate so well to your words.  Strange things happen in the still of the night.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

ecrivan
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3 posted 2002-06-03 11:51 PM


sometimes I would awake to a call from someone in my dreams..can identify here:hats off:


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4 posted 2002-06-04 11:16 AM




(smiles) Oh Tim, this is wonderful, sweet friend, I believe the night can always bring such mysterious gifts, you say them so well here! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tim, thank you for sahring!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

ethome
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5 posted 2002-06-04 11:18 AM


Nice flow and meter to this piece and good writing!
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