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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2002-06-03 10:48 PM


Never count on anyone
They never will be there
Using and abusing you
Is all they want you for
Promises are made
Broken just as quick
Never believe a word
None of them are true
Depend on yourself
Never anyone else
Life is better that way
Men, they seem to break your heart
Not even giving it a second thought
By Sue 6-3-02




© Copyright 2002 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-06-03 10:51 PM


Only the bad ones, Sue...

They are the majority, I know, but there are others...don't give up the good fight

Suetang
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2 posted 2002-06-03 11:16 PM


Hello Sue

Your words spoke many truths and in this day and age it does get harder to trust some people.  There are so many who will hurt our feelings without a second thought and I can only hope that you find the love and happiness you deserve.

Take care......Sue

Suetang

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3 posted 2002-06-04 02:05 AM


Don't let the bad apples spoil your taste for the pie. Some people are there, and some are not. It's sometimes hard to see which ones are rotten at the core, until after you've had a big bite. Hugs and peaceful thoughts.
Maybe try a sweet peach?????

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4 posted 2002-06-04 11:59 AM


SuzieQ~
Your words fall sadly~
Not all men hurt ... honest Injun !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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5 posted 2002-06-04 12:03 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Sue, it indeed is getting so hard to trust people nowadays, although there are ones we must trust, for if we trust no one we may be isolated from all the world, for there are good people who will honestly help us out! (kiss on cheek) This is a powerfully touching poem, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiufl heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2002-06-04 01:49 PM


Sue,
It's time for a new scale.

ethome
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7 posted 2002-06-04 01:53 PM


Well, that's true I guess to a certain extent but it's a shame to let all that indescribable excitement of meeting a new love go to waste isn't it?
Damn world makes us all too cautious when all we want - is to be loved!!

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