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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2002-06-03 10:17 PM






~Thanks to my friend, June,
for the beautiful graphic inspiration~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

© Copyright 2002 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-06-03 10:23 PM


Will you stop making the rest of us look like amateurs? The NERVE!!!!!


Think I like it...?

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2 posted 2002-06-03 10:24 PM


Marge...This is just so incredibly beautiful. I love the way you show us the perfect picture and paint your words around it.  ***Ivy Rose
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3 posted 2002-06-03 10:25 PM


this IS so good !!!
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4 posted 2002-06-03 11:15 PM


Marge:  This is lovely!  I enjoy the trees etched in black filigree against the moon or even the sunrise and sunset for that matter. Beautiful poem and picture!

Betty Lou Hebert

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5 posted 2002-06-03 11:17 PM


This is absolutely beautiful, Marge! I love the way you do this.
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6 posted 2002-06-03 11:18 PM


Hello Marge

This was simply exquisite. The words and picture complimented each other so well.

Take care...... Sue

Suetang

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7 posted 2002-06-03 11:22 PM



Isn't the computer wonderful, where we can create such lovelies...this is wonderful Marge...simply Margnificient...

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (06-03-2002 11:23 PM).]

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8 posted 2002-06-04 12:40 PM


Margie girl darling sister of my soul and writer of the night’s dance, you know I utterly utterly love this. YOU are so good at this, but then no one has your affinity to moonlight, or your ability to shape the light into jewels of written wonder.

Don’t you ever take your pen out of that poetical inkwell darling heart, you are far too good to ever stop. This is simply gorgeous the flow as soft as moonlight over skin. I love it utterly utterly, and the artwork is splendid


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

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9 posted 2002-06-04 01:50 AM


OMG!!!!!!! Marge.....
I can't believe the beauty! both the pic and the poem!

~ artistic hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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10 posted 2002-06-04 10:43 AM


when ever you are Luna inspired we can expect poetry in motion...
both the poem and pic are perfect.

"in silhouetted glow"  ... beautiful.

When man is lead to arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations
When mans concern narrows, poetry reminds him the diversity of existence

JFK

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11 posted 2002-06-04 10:51 AM


ms marge, I enjoy what you do
with your art and your images
such splender

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12 posted 2002-06-04 10:55 AM


Marge,
Love your shadows of beauty.

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13 posted 2002-06-04 11:05 AM


Friends~
You each make it such a blessing to share my little thoughts~
Thank you all from the heart of this poetess~

Balladeer~
Hey you ... you're my favorite amateur~

IvyRose~
Thanks so very, very much~

OneSlickLady~
Thanks ... glad you liked it~

BettyLou~
Me too !  I just have to *hug* June for sending me this one~
I've now got Foreverly Yours, Ink
in the process of being registered~
And wouldn't you know ... I spelled 'Ink' wrong on this post !

SmartieChick~
Awwwww, you're so good for me !
Thank you~

SueTang~
Thanks so very much~

Karilea~
It is !  And sharing is even better !

MarshaLove~
Ohhhhh, I don't think it'll come out ...
sort of stuck-in-the-inkwell-of-life, I am !
I just UTTERLY adore you !!

Lyra~
The words just seemed to follow the glow of that moon~
Thanks, sweetie~

JanetMarie~
Always, I appreciate you~

DarkStranger~
Aww, thanks very much~

Seymour~
*hugs* and *thanks* .. BIG HElPINGS OF BOTH~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (06-04-2002 11:16 AM).]

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14 posted 2002-06-04 11:10 AM


Michael took the words right out of my mouth ... and he better stop that, too!
Marge, this is fabulous.
I love it

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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15 posted 2002-06-04 11:14 AM


Marge
You should be writing inspirational cards because you always inspire me to the fullest.
That picture is just too cool with your beautiful words set in it!

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InterLoper~
Well ... the NERVE of him !!
Thanks sweetie for thinking what you didn't say~

ETHome~
Oh, you read minds well ... I am hoping to launch a line 'soon'~
Thanks so much~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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17 posted 2002-06-04 03:56 PM


This is AWESOME. And the photo is just amazing. That is my most loved scene, after my palm trees
Sandra

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18 posted 2002-06-04 04:06 PM


Marge....

You are the Lady in the Moon...Surely you
know that...

And I agree with 'Deer....you make the rest
of us look like amateurs....

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19 posted 2002-06-04 04:45 PM


Now yassee Margie...if I had titled this poem that way, everyone wouldda thought I was writing about having my butt in a sling!!! Very nice job here sweetie...
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20 posted 2002-06-04 04:46 PM


and another thing, could you imagine if I'd added "graphics" to my poem?...cradled moon?...
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21 posted 2002-06-04 04:46 PM


and another thing...I thought I was your favorite amateur!!!
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22 posted 2002-06-04 05:32 PM


Note to Toe (tough to write since I'm ROFL): You're MY favorite, sweets... don't get greedy! LOL

I love this, Marge... it's beautiful to look at, lovely to read... which rather epitomizes any collaboration of Marge and June. *S*

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23 posted 2002-06-04 05:35 PM


Lovely writing...and the fabulous picture makes we wish I knew how to include artwork with my writing...James
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CatalinaMoon~
Thanks so much for letting me know you enjoyed it~

Magnus~
Awwwww, you say the nicest things~
But, but ... I only do what I can do ... it takes no special talent ... honest Injun !

Toe~
LOL-ing ... when I saw THREE notifications from you in my mailbox ... I thought for sure that your server burped !!!

1. Tee-Hee ... I heard you've 'always' got your butt in a sling !
2. Butt ... Suthern already sent me that photo ! (wasn't that the one, SuthernGal ?)
3. Whoa !  I heard YOU were a PRO !

Thank you for dropping in on my little moon-show sweetie~

Suthern~
Thanks for the priceless (unless he can be blackmailed) photo !
Thankee gal ... you checking air fares yet ?

JamesMichael~
Awwww, well sweetie, until you do ... I'm pleased you enjoyed mine~
Thanks so much~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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25 posted 2002-06-04 09:20 PM


"Where I wil wait in
pause of phase
stepping forth on next
total amaze"

*smiles* just how much I love this stanza.  It is truly a very beautiful poem, Marge!

mycafe

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26 posted 2002-06-04 09:36 PM


MyCafe~
Thank you so very, very much ....
I hope we'll see one from you real soon~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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27 posted 2002-06-05 08:04 AM


Marge,
A perfect marraige of poetry and illustration!
Joe Lamando

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28 posted 2002-06-05 08:43 AM


Joe~
Thank you sooooo much~
It sure was an inspiring graphic~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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29 posted 2002-06-05 09:35 AM


ohhh Marge how Ive missed reading your awesome poetry, this is awesome...I hope to be back soon to read a lot more.

Thanks for sharing beautiful lady

((hugs))
Charisma

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30 posted 2002-06-05 09:45 AM


Charisma~
You've just made my day darling lady~

It is soooooooooooooo good to see you.
Titia and I were just discussing via e-mail how we've missed you~

Hope you will find a moment to share one of your LOVELY Tanka's with us~
*Hugs* ... BIG *HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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31 posted 2002-06-05 09:52 AM


Marge

What splendor!!

You, and the moon!

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32 posted 2002-06-05 10:08 AM


MsMartieMoon~
You KNOW I love the glow of you~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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33 posted 2002-06-05 04:24 PM


awww didn't espect that anyone would miss me at least, hope to be back soon, with or without tankas or other stuff...lol...if I ever could find that muse of me

((hugs))
Charisma


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34 posted 2002-06-05 05:22 PM


Well MsCharisma~
I think you'll find that MANY of us have missed you and your beautiful pieces of poetry~
Love you gal~
Good to have you home~
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

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