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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2002-06-03 07:37 PM



Morning

steaming night
brings calm
morning
I wake
to your
soft snore
calming me
to your presence
I watch you
as you dream
and wonder
where your
unrestricted thoughts
take you
see your chest
raise and lower
in your
fantasy world
your heart
beats so deep
it pulses
in your neck
and then
I notice
your lashes
are the perfect
butterfly kiss

"The heart is the toughest part of the body, tenderness is in the hands." Carolyn Forche'

© Copyright 2002 Helen Chambers - All Rights Reserved
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2002-06-03 07:45 PM


Ahhh, what delightful images you have created here!
Lovely indeed.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2002-06-03 07:55 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is sooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I too always dream of such lovely thoughts like this, the kiss of an eyelash must feel soooooo beautiful! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Helen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2002-06-04 10:23 AM


Lucky him
My eyes just fell down the page reading this wonderful piece.  Write on!

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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4 posted 2002-06-04 10:26 AM


slickster, this is soft mouth whispers
enjoyed it

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