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Soleil Noir
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0 posted 2002-06-03 02:10 PM



Early Morn

You are heavy words
slumbering low across the horizon
of eyes that refuse to wake

waiting for your touch

Coffee-creamed lips sip life
to morning and you come,
warming

more than the cup

in moving sheets
you move me
stretching smiles to
begin the tickle trade

of trickling thoughts…

let’s call in sick
and make each other well…




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Dark Stranger
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1 posted 2002-06-03 02:20 PM


lets call in well
and make each other ill
at ease...with pleaure

ms noir, such delightful images

Martie
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2 posted 2002-06-03 02:22 PM


Soleil

What a good idea! ...and had to laugh at DS's reply...

Hope you have a great day!

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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2002-06-03 03:16 PM


What a lovely thought...

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Sven
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4 posted 2002-06-03 04:04 PM


ah yes. . .

darken the sun
for but a few more hours
while the healing continues. . .

well done. . .

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Magnus
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5 posted 2002-06-03 05:10 PM


Seems like it is time to use up some sick
leave....

VERY NICE thought here Soleil...yes indeed.

Severn
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6 posted 2002-06-03 07:05 PM


beautiful, hushful...a delight to savour soleil..

K

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7 posted 2002-06-03 07:26 PM


Oh Soleil....my my....this is softly sensual.
Enjoyed so much....sure did!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Zinsser
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8 posted 2002-06-04 09:43 AM


beautiful.......
~~ Connie ~~

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9 posted 2002-06-04 12:00 PM




(smiles) Awwwwww, this is soooooo beautifully sensual, sweet friend, I love it! (sigh) May true loves beautry always fill your heart, sweet friend, I love it, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Soleil, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Soleil Noir
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10 posted 2002-06-06 09:42 AM



You are all wonderful
slow wakers...
you all felt the stretch
so very well...

thank you for reading...

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