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Songbird
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0 posted 2002-06-03 02:00 PM


Lost in a forest of the trivial
It is midnight
Not much time is left
Will daylight find you
Still an old toad frog
Waiting to be kissed?

You still sit upon
the same isolated spot
you have always been

When you will you discover you have legs
That can perpel you where you long to go?

Your complaining croak
Has never taken you where you long to go

Isn't it time for trying something different?

[This message has been edited by Songbird (06-03-2002 02:01 PM).]

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INclan
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1 posted 2002-06-03 02:06 PM


Ah the age old chant, physician heal thyself. I hope you head your advice. I had taken it to heart years ago... to get up and get moving, experience the adventure. Thank You for voicing encouragement to us all.

INclan

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2 posted 2002-06-03 08:10 PM




BRAVO!!! Oh my gosh, I have missed you so so much, sweet friend, I am so happy to see your wonderful words again, yes, may we always try something different and just hop from lily-pad to lily-pad in pursuit for something special, sweet friend, this is excellent, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Songbird, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Marge Tindal
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3 posted 2002-06-08 05:41 PM


SongBird~
LOL ... I love this part especially ~

'Will daylight find you
Still an old toad frog
Waiting to be kissed?'


*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
         noles1@totcon.com                    

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2002-06-08 05:44 PM


Songbird
Very nice, enjoyed

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