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Interloper
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Deep in the heart

0 posted 2002-06-03 10:08 AM


just the thought of you
cradling my head lovingly
sheltered by your love

Inspired by:Bits of a Journal – from the Soddy, date unknown




Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (06-03-2002 01:36 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-06-03 10:15 AM



How deeply appreciative I am, Interloper, that you are enjoying this period of history with me.  Thank you so much for this delightful senryu to accompany the song of the Soddy...

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2 posted 2002-06-03 04:41 PM


This is so beautiful and so is the inspiration.

Admiring you at Passions.

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3 posted 2002-06-03 06:57 PM


Bob darling boy again your writing is outstandingly beautiful in its form it’s utterly utterly breathtaking in its beauty. Your writing in this is exquisite, I love it utterly utterly.

Sometimes I swear you write with starlight, this is one of those times. I’m deeply touched by these words of finest flow that trickle through this delight with pure wonder. Obviously they came from within a mind of sparkling dreams

Absolutely beautiful writing darling I love the thought of you in this. Perfect darling heart utterly utterly perfect. And yes I love it utterly

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

     
  

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

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4 posted 2002-06-03 07:01 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo gorgeous, sweet friend, I too just always love that feeling too in my dreams, I still yearn to have love close to my heart but I just know it must feel so beautiful! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton


"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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5 posted 2002-06-03 07:20 PM


Interloper~

This is simply beautiful...

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Interloper
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6 posted 2002-06-04 12:15 PM


Sunshine ~
Thanks for the wonderful inspiration

BrightStar ~
thank you.

Marsha ~
You are just the perfect thing for my heart, love   Thank you for the wonderful and heartfelt words.

Noah `
Thank you my friend.  I always enjoy rading your repleis

Nancy Lee ~
I can't tell you how happy your reply makes me

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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