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My Gallery of Dreams
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My Gallery of Dreams |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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My Gallery of Dreams It seems to me to be quite large I would say a mile long barge. Full of fantasies not true but End to end there all of you. Compilations of many years Sad and joy and happiness tears Whispers that fill the wind with song And leavings of a billabong A magic carpet takes me there And the smallest wile is the fare. An escalate to ecstasy Rolling in a fantasy. Into the greenest greenery Into the softest scenery And lay me down a field of seem The velvet soft that is a dream It is a senile thing to do But only senile over you My Gallery of Dreams It seems to me to be quite large I would say a mile long barge. Full of fantasies not true but End to end there all of you. Compilations of many years Sad and joy and happiness tears Whispers that fill the wind with song And leavings of a billabong A magic carpet takes me there And the smallest wile is the fare. An escalate to ecstasy Rolling in a fantasy. Into the greenest greenery Into the softest scenery And lay me down a field of seem The velvet soft that is a dream It is a senile thing to do But only senile over you |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Whispers that fill the wind with song And leavings of a billabong ============================== An escalate to ecstasy Rolling in a fantasy. Into the greenest greenery Into the softest scenery And lay me down a field of seem The velvet soft that is a dream It is a senile thing to do But only senile over you ===================================== Its not senility Stinky...its the TEA  LOLAnd leavings of a billabong An escalate to ecstasy and those will be my lines of waaay cool for the day... You know we love your rhyme scheme dreams Sy-babes...what better way to start our day than with a smile from yours and Randys wile   |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I guess that senility can actually be a pretty fun place when I look at through these poetic eyes... Very nice, Sy..  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy "Into the greenest greenery Into the softest scenery And lay me down a field of seem The velvet soft that is a dream" Whatever it is, it's a good thing! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Grins  |
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Elan Member
since 2002-05-03
Posts 382State of Wide Eye |
Twice as nice senility's vice |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
you clever thing, you... very effective use of repetition for your illustration sy...very effective use of repetition for your illu--HEY? IS THIS STUFF CONTAGIOUS?  Enjoyed! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling heart this is as always superb writing from you. very clever of you to spin your dream net twice. Which makes it exceptionally perfect This is spectacular writing. The type of writing that takes you into the very heart of it and holds you captured and spell bound until the last word. Writing such as this is too fine, too rare to be tossed aside carelessly, or read too quickly in haste. Writing such as this must be allowed to sink into the soul of the reader and settle like a mantle over the spirit. Imparting wisdom, sharpening the senses and giving the soul such wonder, such thoughts, that they inspire, and stir that place within. Perfect as always darling boy you really are an utterly utterly excellent writer  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh my gosh, this is sooooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I believe deep in all our hearts we all have this special place and the most magical part of it all is that we can always put these galleries on exhibit here at Passions like you always do so wonderfully! (sigh) This is a wonderful work of art, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Enjoyed so very much Sy! Wonderful images created here. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Double your pleasure Double your fun With two copy treasure 'Stead of just one Senility??? Enjoyed Sy...thanx... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Today was a busy day and had no time for the personal answers. You already know I love you all and thank you once again for the wonderful replies. Sy |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
I like this lots. the repitition worked really well, and it had a soft dreamy flow Sandra |
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powerofthysword Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 116Glendale, AZ USA |
You sure have a good sense of putting words together to create a vivid image of what you are talking about, I raise my glass to you. Staring into the sun just makes you blind to what beauty actually exists in the sky. |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Seymour I simply adored this piece of writing. I was totally swept away and I could relate so well as I am yet another dreamer such as yourself. Thank you for your worderful words. Take care......Sue Suetang |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sandra, powerofthysword, Sue, I am taking a moment just to thank you all. I hope tomorrow will be a quiet day. |
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