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Long Overdue... |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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Tell me your thoughts on the world today… Why each minute in civilization forces you further astray? “Speak of glass houses- that no longer exist? How men cast stones- led by iron fist?” It can’t be so bad, friend- (just push and shove) What about this freedom- we brag so freely of? “A money populated society- deems no one free… Corruption runs it’s course, not sensitivity…” Retention of progress- belated concert? Higher communication- exactly what can this hurt? “Blatant bitterness, (you must think of me) Retention brings hatred, drown about by degree… Where’s the retention- of song and innocence? The love of simplicity- not the building of fence…” Suppress the foundation- terror in defiance, Won’t there always remain- cacophony in silence? “Be that as it may I shall not overstay” “This world becomes less- than my ideal design, I believe it’s just safer- to reside in my mind…” A vacation I’d say is long overdue… Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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TriXter Member
since 2002-03-20
Posts 112The One |
I enjoyed this poem alot, It Bled of feeling The man of few words... |
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BrandeeM Junior Member
since 2002-05-01
Posts 45 |
exactly the world today...excellent write!!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
yes. . .to visit the mind. . . your own, or someone else's??  as long as there's food, I'm there. . . lol. . .great work hon. . . and yes, I know the e-mail, but so do you. . . ---------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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MidnightSon Member
since 2002-05-15
Posts 312between the gutter & the stars |
absolutely fantastic! i have similar conversations with myself... brilliant thoughts. adding this to my library... "The soul is oftentimes a battlefield where reason and judgement wage war on passion and appetite." |
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ambermize Member
since 2001-04-21
Posts 157California |
Tanya??.....thinking about stuff today huh? Beautiful to share with you as always..love you....kiss my baby |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggsssssss) Oh Tanya, this is so very sad, sweet friend, I feel that much of the corruption is the world is to blame on money, though there are also other problems and I too wish I could take a vacation, though the sorrows are everywhere and it can be so hard! (sad sigh) Always follow your heart and try to always find solace in what's good in life, sweet friend, my thoughts are with you, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tanya, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Devina~ Wonderful thoughts in the 'shaker' ... Lovely blend, poetess~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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