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TriXter
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The One

0 posted 2002-06-03 12:30 PM



One moment my heart makes me smile
the next im sad for a while
you make me go outta my mind here and there
my heart in between 2 spots and to me it aint fair.

they say love can alter moves and talk to you
so if you get hit will it move you too
in a knot is this feeling where i dont know whats up
where i write on this page where my feeling errupt, love feels corrupt
writing all im feeling, i feel im losin'
my heart bends and twists this is confusion

hiding pain that my heart creates
covering these tears that could fill many lakes
looking at you wondering if it was a mistake.
the one you watch in awe from across the hall
she makes you stare ,you feel you cant brethe or see
hurting, left of youre chest this is changing me
making me feel and see what i couldnt before, at the end of the day all i want is to know more.

but the yang to this ying is also as bad
this is the side thats dark and cold makes you just mad
Sometime this world makes you feel like youre crazy
sometimes this world can just amaze me
people tell you what you dont want to know about her
now you feel like the worlds almost over
all these thoughts youre hearts in for a brusin
now youre back where you started youre back in this confusion

exterior is everything when these feelings are involed
but everyone wants you to show youre pain, were not so evolved.
I act like this pain dont phase me, Inside it drives me crazy
all this pressure terrifys the depths of my soul
this worlds so dark and so darn cold
i wish i was godlike so a new one i could mold
i sit and think about pain and feeling observed
and all that is left on my paper is one word
Confusion

The man of few words...

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baerlon
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1 posted 2002-06-03 01:27 AM


I wish i knew what to say, but i don't understand my self.  You spoke something i feel here

There's a peace inside us all
Let it be your friend
It will help you carry on
In the end
There's a peace inside us all
-Creed

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2 posted 2002-06-03 08:26 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Trixter, this is so very sad, sweet friend, there is indeed a ying and yang to everything, but try and not be confused and always just accept what has been and look to the future with a smile and believe in the light of ying and yang! (sigh) This is sad but wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Trixter, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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