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ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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0 posted 2002-06-02 10:58 PM


Peace inside
The gentle ripple on the calm sea
Easing in the rocking motion

As Daylight breaks
The shadows lifted in a blur of glee
Bathing earth in get-up potion

When evening falls
The cloaked disguise of night in ebony
Wrapped within a sleepy notion

An attitude as deep as any ocean
The antidote to all commotion
Inner glide

Copyright Kkh 6/2/02

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
blakloks
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since 2002-06-01
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1 posted 2002-06-02 11:13 PM


i liked this poem alot
i almost wanted to use it for my lit homework but i had to use one from a classic poet.
if i cld write like you i would be very blessed
i like your style of writing

Madame Chipmunk
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2 posted 2002-06-02 11:14 PM


When evening falls
The cloaked disguise of night in ebony
Wrapped within a sleepy notion

Very beautiful, Kathleen....
I love your imagery and use of words here.

~ evening hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

Magnus
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3 posted 2002-06-02 11:51 PM


Kathy,  this is superb...Like how you wrote
it in distinct parts...each playing off the
other part...

Nice write...very nice..

ecrivan
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since 2001-12-10
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my own state
4 posted 2002-06-03 12:14 PM


so much of our character runs like the periods of the day..interesting


BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
5 posted 2002-06-04 11:05 PM


My goodness, I enjoyed your glide and the sleepy notion, not to mention all the commotion!  It's a wrap all the way around.

Nice writing~

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
6 posted 2002-06-04 11:08 PM



and inner peace
resides...


Balladeer
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7 posted 2002-06-04 11:18 PM


I could certainly use a little of that get-up potion once in a while.....

As always you are smooth as silk, Diamond lady

jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
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Spring, Texas
8 posted 2002-06-05 09:36 PM


Guess I missed this the first time around...my loss!

Beautiful, haunting (to my mind anyway ((not in a spectral way)) ) write.

jwesley

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