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ambermize
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0 posted 06-02-2002 08:47 PM       View Profile for ambermize   Email ambermize   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ambermize


It is like a kindred spirit,
The pain that I've collected,
A gaurdian to my soul,
That now will stand protected.

It is like an agonizing torture,
The tears you've made me cry,
Still such an empty space they fill,
So I hold them all inside.

It is like an amazing creature,
These memories that I keep,
Tearing at me, drowning out,
All the precious words you speak.

It is like a gifted angel,
Bestowed upon me here,
To teach me all the wisdom,
That instills in me, this fear.

It is like a taunting presence,
This hold you have on me,
Deceit, and utter ignorance,
Blinded by you, now I see.

It was like a distant calling,
I heard throughout the night,
You left.. and I let you,
My heart chose not to fight.

It was like a shattered laughter,
That danced inside my soul,
The day that I could realize,
That you don't make me whole.

It was like a pleasant calm,
That washed over my life,
As I take in all the beauty,
That you stole from my life.

[This message has been edited by ambermize (06-02-2002 09:34 PM).]

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(big hugggsssssss) Oh Amber, this is such a powerfully striking poem, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and the heartbreak you suffered but I hope now beauty has returned to your heart and now love has reached out to you with heart and compassion! (sigh) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Amber, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

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2 posted 06-02-2002 09:37 PM       View Profile for devina   Email devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

Oh G's up top....he he (you know!!!)

It was like a pleasant calm,
That washed over my life,
As I take in all the beauty,
That you stole from my life.


This was an amazing set Ambs...I'm lovin every minute of your healing sis. I KNOW you will make it through this with time, patience, and of course- ME!!

Love you Ambs!!
Tanya

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3 posted 06-03-2002 05:08 PM       View Profile for ambermize   Email ambermize   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ambermize

Thanks so much....It still hurts unimaginably but I can feel the pain lessening everyday...so nice to be able to come here and heal..makes things so much easier....
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4 posted 06-08-2002 05:20 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Amber~

'You left.. and I let you'

Sometimes .... what seems like the hardest thing to do .... becomes the easiest~

*Hugs* gal~
~*Marge*~

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Interesting...James
ambermize
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Marge- hey you.....where are the pictures missy? I know that grandmas hord them like no other but hows about some sharing eh??

James- thanks for reading, sometimes life is interesting when you get a chance to read it through someone elses eyes you know? thanks agian

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