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Second_Guess
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since 2001-11-04
Posts 11


0 posted 2002-06-02 02:08 PM



Sometimes

Sometimes
    Words just
        Aren’t enough
            To show how
                You feel.

Sometimes
    I see the hurt
        That I caused
            Burning inside
                Your eyes

Sometimes
    All I want
        To do is hide
            And forget
                All the hurt

Sometimes
     I wish this
        Never began
            So you would
                 Be spared the pain.



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ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2002-06-02 02:10 PM


Quite a stream of conscience streaming down the page.....I like how you've presented this........Nice work!!

Oh I had to come back because I forgot to welcome you so WELCOME!!

[This message has been edited by ethome (06-02-2002 02:11 PM).]

angeliceyes48198
Junior Member
since 2002-05-28
Posts 16
Michigan,USA
2 posted 2002-06-02 03:56 PM


I can sympathize with you, I do feel your pain. I recently had a falling out with a close friend. If this friend was ever truly your friend, all will be forgiven. Friendship is something that is not easily forgotten but, the love of a friendship is unconditional  just a different kind of love. Just give your friend time. Welcome to passions!
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2002-06-02 04:13 PM


Very nice...James
Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2002-06-02 04:47 PM


Very nicely said.
Love the presentation!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Mistletoe Angel
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5 posted 2002-06-02 08:38 PM




(big hugggsssssss) This is so sad but beautiful, sweet friend, I think we all can't help but forgive others when we get someone into an emotional mess while we love them deep down so much! (sigh) My thoughts and heart goes out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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