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Languishing
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Languishing |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Languishing Languishing a moments power Like the blooming of a flower It lets the sweet of odor fly To catch a passing butterfly It is a net without the lace But fills a multitude of space. It is a magnet on the breeze That taunts the air with magic tease. It sighs to it in silent lure In the language of the sure And brings it close enough to see And close enough to land on me. It’s then I feed it nectars sweet The honey of a friendly treat That brings it back each time I bloom And leaves no time for endings gloom What sweeter of a moment’s bliss Than touch of a butterflies kiss |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Smiling...smilingsmilingsmiling.... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Thank you, thank you, thank you.  |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very pretty, gives a feeling of hope. Sandra |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy, this is again exquisite writing, I love the flow of this washing over my soul like a douche of crystal light. Excellent writing as always, but then you know that don’t you darling boy? Of course you do! Butterflies flutter here and there Landing gently without care Pretty wings in constant flight Decorate the air with light But for faithful and for true You know what you have to do Ask the bee to stop and sip The liquid nectar from your lip Flowers bloom in scent divine Call the butterflies all the time But if you want constancy You have to call the honeybee Marsha You know I utterly utterly adore this it is simply perfect as are you, superb writing excellent use of language and the rhyme and rhythm cannot be bettered. As always Mushy    Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
 ...I LOVE Butterfly kisses... |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Such a soft and gentle piece this is, Sy ... beautifully written. Best wishes and hugs, /Kit |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
It is a magnet on the breeze That taunts the air with magic tease. It sighs to it in silent lure In the language of the sure And brings it close enough to see And close enough to land on me. ===================================== That brings it back each time I bloom And leaves no time for endings gloom What sweeter of a moment's bliss Than touch of a butterflies kiss ===================================== Well, I have some raspberry lip gloss ... will that do?  *L**winkiewinkie*   |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Very nicely writen, much enjoyed. Sincerely Rick |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sandra, Thank you sweet. Marsha, Thank you for the poem it was delicious. Nan, Just sent you one. Kit, Thank you, hope all is well. Sent you a butterfly kiss too. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, It will do with or without the raspberry gloss. WWRS Rick, Thank you for the read and like. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo pretty, sweet friend, I love that "magnet to a breeze" line, that really made me smile, though I love the whole poem! (sigh) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Seymour your beautiful poetic words languish my thoughts into a form of inner peace......nicely done! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Noah. Ethome, And thank you for the nicely done. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
What sweeter of a moment’s bliss Than touch of a butterflies kiss I love butterflies, Sy...and I love your poem. ~ butterfly hugsLyra |
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DarkAngelChelle Member
since 2001-12-06
Posts 87Kansas |
*sigh* This piece just makes me feel wonderfully light and content. Perfect title for such a sweetly relaxing write.  ~What is cherished most is what must be the hardest fought for.~ |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
...that taunts the air with magic tease I believe this is my favorite line, but definitely hard to say. Great poem. ThisDiamond |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Seymour~ I love everything about this write ! 'It is a net without the lace But fills a multitude of space. It is a magnet on the breeze That taunts the air with magic tease.' Okay .... I like this bestest~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lyra, Thank you for the butterfly hugs. DarkAngelChelle, Beautiful comment. This Dimond, Thank you for the great. Marge, You always pick the best. |
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