navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #20 » one into two
Open Poetry #20
Post A Reply Post New Topic one into two Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
TriXter
Member
since 2002-03-20
Posts 112
The One

0 posted 2002-06-01 02:40 PM


I hoped to love you, that you would be the one for me
but you did not feel, and sadly thats what i did see.
with him the one that youre friends told me, theres something there
i could not help but wonder and stare.
to the left of my chest, i felt something tare.

a few more down to kill all the pain
my face in my arm so my tears dont stain
alone on the seat to think things through
friends around wondering what to do
my pain shines bright, its not hard to see
this party at night all i want to do is flee.
another sharp pain, another tear rolls down.

Decided to giveup, you dont feel the way i do
but as i finish this poem, my heart tares into two.


The man of few words...

© Copyright 2002 TriXter - All Rights Reserved
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2002-06-01 02:47 PM


This is so sad Trixter.....I felt so bad for you all the way through.......Damn love is so hard on the head after it shakes the heart up!
Mistletoe Angel
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
2 posted 2002-06-01 03:28 PM




(big hugggsssss) Oh Trixter, this is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to yours and I pray soon true love will come to you anjd will give infor you and remain loyal to your heart and have you cry tears of happiness! (sigh) My thoughts are with you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #20 » one into two

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary