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Matrimony & Moonshine |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Stars shudder *In mid-twinkle* Just as I Pause For You ~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Souls whisper Pure clarity In volumes Of Soft Love ~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Crimson shadows Sprinkle my cheeks Memories Dust The corners In My mind ~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Your smile Beats brilliant Tattoos Across my Starving Shattered Soul ~*~*~*~*~*~*~ I relinquish My hand Into Your keeping… As I forever Hold you In My Heart… ~*~*~*~*~*~*~ United as one Beneath Stars and sky Matrimony And moonshine… ~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, may sweet endless memories of love always dust the corners of your heart and moonlight forever cast strobelights every time you dance! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Tanya, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
A very touching romantic write. I really like this verse "Your smile Beats brilliant Tattoos Across my Starving Shattered Soul" Great emotion in this. Love the ending! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
dang, i was thinking you were talking about the alcoholic type of moonshine... would have fit better  |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Well...this is quite gorgeous..but in my neck of the woods..could have been one of those shotgun kind. Love the way you painted this starry picture.. Sincerely, Reg |
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RSEvans Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147Tulsa, OK, USA |
and here by the title I thought your wedding was about to be like mine...I had a military wedding...well...there were guns there. And let's just say I was feelin no pain. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Crimson shadows Sprinkle my cheeks Memories Dust The corners In My mind ~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Your smile Beats brilliant Tattoos Across my Starving Shattered Soul ============================== love the devotion in this...and the presentation and word play. Dig the alliterations too so much to see here dancing in the moonshine Beautiful romantic write girlie. jm Cant stand up for fallin apart |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
devina A touching look into splashes of of a romantic soul. Enjoyed much! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
well now. . . just had to go and get all mushy on me eh?? well. . . ok. . . when it's this good. . . how can I say no?? great work. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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