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the silence rhapsody
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the silence rhapsody |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands 
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tonight I heard silence again I walked my dogs and it was then in the darkest dark of night nature had polished all stars so bright that I stood still in open land dimmed the flashlight in my hand even the dogs I didn't hear a moment that I hold most dear when nature plays it's symphony sometimes I think only for me the silence rhapsody tonight I heard her song again I listened for a while and then a little bird was joining in and I got goosepimples on my skin so pure a sound was seldom heard duet between silence and a bird I stood frozen to the ground this place to live that I have found I wouldn't know where else to be when nature's playing it's symphony the silence rhapsody A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... Check out my new website: lookheretitia.fcpages.com (I didn't 'link' this, so it won't take too much space).I [This message has been edited by Titia Geertman (06-01-2002 01:09 PM).] |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I love Mother Nature's symphony so much and to hear the birds sing in stillness is the most gorgeous warbling of all! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Titia, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Titia! This is absolutely beautiful! Thank you! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Titia What a precious moment you encountered! This is what makes the love of poetry such a wonderful delight! Very nice writing I must say! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
TitiaTitia~ You touch me with the beauty of this 'rhapsody'~ May very well be my 'favorite' favorite of yours dear lady~ *HUGS* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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powerofthysword Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 116Glendale, AZ USA |
Awesome, I love poems with references to nature in them, and you accomplished that in a very unique way. Thank you for sharing this with everybody. Staring into the sun just makes you blind to what beauty actually exists in the sky. |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Ahh I always enjoy these moments of total stillness so very much, maybe that's why I'm a nightmoth. Thanks for the 'h' Marge, you're a sweet. Knuffels to you all Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
I like this, Titia. This is very nice. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
I love nature's silent rhapsody too, Titia, but I also love the sound of the birds singing..... Your poem is an absolute gem  ~hugs of lovely silenceLyra |
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Muys Member
since 2002-04-06
Posts 389The Netherlands |
OH Titia I feel the same thinks Yesterday evening I t was so nice There was peace around me. When nature plays it's symfhony. I think.... "He play only for me. We love the silence I love you dear child MAMMA |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
The beauty of the place was so clear in your poetry. Enjoyed the visit. ThisDiamond |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Hi Mom, yes I know you love this silence too as you do love this whole countryside. You're always roaming around nature in that scooter of yours. Love you too dear Mom. This Diamond, I'm glad it did, thanks Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Cloudishness Junior Member
since 2002-05-27
Posts 15 |
This is so beautiful. Jim Sullivan |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Lovely Titia...James |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Thanks Cloudishness, and JamesMichael, you're a sweet guy, thanks and a knuffel for you. Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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