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Toerag
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0 posted 2002-05-31 03:43 PM


Nan the censor sits
Somewhere between
These poems to be seen
And the monitor screens
With her scissors purpose poised
Watching the Toerag stuff
That will sizzle through
The magic wires
And light up
Like welding shops
The ho-hum forums
And with a kindergarten
Arts and crafts concept
Of moral responsibility
Snips out
The rough talk
The unpopular opinion
Or anything with teeth
Or sexual inuendo
And renders
A pattern of ideas
Full of holes
A doily
For your mind....

Luvya Nan...Toe

© Copyright 2002 Toerag - All Rights Reserved
Balladeer
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1 posted 2002-05-31 03:49 PM


Hello, doily!!

That's right, Toe....you better be good. Nan has a big eraser AND an attitude!

suthern
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2 posted 2002-05-31 03:50 PM


Someone been after your stuff with a brillo pad again, sweets? *S*
suthern
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3 posted 2002-05-31 03:52 PM


Watch it, Deer one... we blondes know all about having a doily mind... and someone kept dropping stitches on mine! LOL

But on a serious note, this is excellent writing Toe.

[This message has been edited by suthern (05-31-2002 04:16 PM).]

Corinne
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4 posted 2002-05-31 07:38 PM


Go get 'em, Nan! Spare NO Toes!

heh heh

cor

Krissy
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5 posted 2002-05-31 08:04 PM


Toe hi there, Mushy’s eldest daughter here This is an excellent piece of writing, I like this a whole lot.

No one has ever cut holes in my writing, unless it’s my mum who says Krissy darling you really will have to write better if you want to catch up. We love each other really, I’m not sure where mum keeps it, but I do love her really. Where she keeps her really

Truthfully this is a good bit of writing I really like the pace of this one

Love and warm stuff
As always
Krissy



And while thy willing soul transpiers
at every pore with instant fires
Andrew Marvell 1621-1678

[This message has been edited by Krissy (05-31-2002 08:05 PM).]

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2002-05-31 08:13 PM


Toe,
Good write, enjoyed.

Enchantress
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7 posted 2002-05-31 08:23 PM


Enjoyed this Mr.Toe!!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Sunshine
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8 posted 2002-05-31 08:46 PM



What Nan doesn't get... she told me I could...LOL...

you're cute Toe...silly, but Cute...

Dr.Moose1
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9 posted 2002-05-31 09:51 PM


Dear Toe,
You're not implying that there would be any type of censorship going on ( were you ?).
Myself, I have seen nothing of the kind (a'course , nobody reads my stuff anyway, 'specially Balladeer.) Good write!
Doc

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10 posted 2002-05-31 09:59 PM




(giggles in delight) Awwwwwww, this is soooooo cute, sweet friend, I love it, Nan is indeed a wonderful poet and loving friend to us all and she does all she can to make this board as comfortable as can be! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Toerag, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Nan
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11 posted 2002-06-01 08:51 PM


I'm sitting with my scissors perched
Before the Passions screen,
To see what scoundrel's in the lurch
In case he gets obscene...

I'll cut and paste him with my glue;
I borrowed it from school.
He'll be all clipped when I get through;
He'll know the golden rule...

I'll make a doily of that Rag
He'll love my snippy trick...
I'll hoist that doily like a flag
Right on his big ol' - TOE...



my3monkeytoes
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12 posted 2002-06-01 10:06 PM


HA HA HA HA HA HA HA!  What's this talk of inuendos?  Too funny, Nan!  Good one!
Tracey
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13 posted 2002-06-01 11:03 PM


Cute Toe, and I love Nan’s response too. I’m giggling at you both.

Everything is possible in the game of life
    (Simple Minds-Promised You a Miracle)

Magnus
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14 posted 2002-06-02 05:05 PM


Toe....looks like you are doomed to become
a doily....

Geez,  I wonder what the rest of the guys
will think of that????

suthern
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15 posted 2002-06-03 10:50 AM


Nan, I love your response... You're a great sport. *G* And picking on you did leave Long John wondering "whut happ'nd?" *G*
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