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. . . love hurts, sometimes . . .
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. . . love hurts, sometimes . . . |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I’m a masochist there's no need for whips or chains love's pain will suffice Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
 Exactly!!! |
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Ladycat
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
That is great. I think that you have captured the mood of most of my relationships. Thank you very much. Love, Ladycat Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Ah... but to hurt is to feel... and to feel is to be alive. *G* You've just explained a lot of my choices! LOL I like this... Now where's the nearest masochists anonymous meeting? *G* |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Bob darling boy, love shouldn’t hurt, you’re doing it wrong. I should flow over your soul with the soft touch of an angel’s wing. I love this darling boy you do these so very well. try my soothing soul kisses I’ll melt away pain There I’ve done another one for you but you can’t expect them to be good I can’t do them I keep getting extra syllables from somewhere. Anyway yours are utterly utterly wonderful and I love it. Love and warm stuff As always Mushy    Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
He he this made me smile! Well done! Me too!! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Righto my man...loves goodby always creates and ache in the soul.... jwesley |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Interloper But....it also feels so good!! |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* I just hope it isn't the kind of pain that goes too deeply...magnificent writing...hugs from me to you...  Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
You got it! Love hurts... YOU do these so well poet sir! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always dancing with you in the summer rain~ [This message has been edited by Enchantress (05-31-2002 01:45 PM).] |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Midnitesun ~ Ewe meen ah did sumpin' right? Ladycat ~ I'm sorry to hear that. You never lived in California didja? Naw... suthern ~ I will be calling the meeting to order this evening and every other friday  Marsha ~ I'm puckering here lay it on me mushy one soothe my soul at last et ~ Grins. You coming to the meeting with suthern jwesley ~ Well said my friend. Martie ~ As much as we do it, it MUST Karen ~ I luv yore hugz. Thanx Nancy Lee ~ Yup. I'm gud, huh If the world agreed with your assay of my work we'd ALL be published!You are too kind, but I LOVE it! Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big hugggssssss) I know this heartache so well, sweet friend, though I love my Joanna so so much, I still haven't met her and I want her so much and the yearning sometimes hurts like whips and chains, while I continue to dream for her for I am much better off knowing her than sacrificing her from my mind! (sigh) This is powerful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes it hurts sometimes and sometimes it feels so good...James |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Well said my friend, well said. Dont know the reason why, seems with all the people in the world that seem to be looking for the same thing that it would'nt be that way, but who knows? Thats the screwed up part that puts the challenge in the whole deal I guess. Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
When by simple choice love is fleeting in its blink stinging tears comply [This message has been edited by Sunshine (05-31-2002 09:06 PM).] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Why does love hurt so? I will never understand why the heart betrays. |
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powerofthysword Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 116Glendale, AZ USA |
Wow, not at all what I expected, but you sure captured the true essence of the meaning behind the poem in as few words as possible. Staring into the sun just makes you blind to what beauty actually exists in the sky. |
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Ivy Rose Senior Member
since 2001-12-29
Posts 1300MA, USA |
Interloper...Ahhh, but the beauty of love is a memory kept forever. Alas, many times, pleasure brings its share of pain. But we need the pain and the pleasure to fully experience life. A wonderfully, thought-provoking Haiku/Senryu!!!!!!!!!!!!! ****Ivy Rose |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
...and bad checks accepted gladly. We don't often cross paths but when we do...i get it. Desperate for changing |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
Short and to the point! |
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Christopher
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
sometimes it only takes a few words to get to the center of a truth we all known, but have rarely voiced so well. you did that. |
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rwood Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793Tennessee |
Ah..how love turns us all..into whipping posts..from time to time. Train has a really good song.."Whipping boy" that touches on the lighter side of the pleasure pain. You summed it up real niice  Sincerely, Reg |
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