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Trashy themes
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Trashy themes |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. 
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Garbage Things we throw away Once was important to us Now reduced to this Dumpster It's stout and smelly Only a short walk for me Flies come in for meals Truck Big white noisy thing Shatters the morning silence Hoisting the dumpster Land fill Mountains of cast offs All leveled by bull dozers Gulls swarming above Space In an orbit cloud Products of technology Clutter up the sky Morals We all have a set The ugly side of mankind Dirty,dirty thoughts paladin |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Right smack dab on target.... in your own unique but so correct perspective |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very interesting Sandra |
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paladin
since 2001-08-05
Posts 930Pensacola,Fl. |
Magnus and Catalinnamoon:Thanks for the comments.This was a challenge to myself. paladin |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yes, this says a lot in a few short but well expressed verses. Nicely done! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Yep, nicely and properly done... jwesley |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paladin~ I LIKE my poets a little on the 'trashy' side~  *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
YES!! Yes!! Yes!! You are becoming quite the master of these Paladin. And I am enjoying them so much! *Many thanks again for your encouragement and friendship* ~Big Hugs~ Nancy ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  WOW!!! Such powerful political thoughts shine from your heart, sweet friend, you truly are the one and only original master at "themes poetry", I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Robert, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
paladin, let's be rash and talk trash together. Kethry Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
These are cool! I like snapshots...I like the progression, and the message behind the set - this is actually very clever, paladin. I just wasn't sure about the last line with the repetition of 'dirty'...I feel that it could be made stronger? Well done...  K |
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