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Open Poetry #20
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Hopeless Romantic
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since 2002-05-22
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0 posted 2002-05-30 02:54 PM



The Pain

Pain
Pain
She feels imense pain
And yet I can do nothing

Pain
Pain
Her moans and crys
The tears in her eyes
I'm so close yet so far away
The words she whispers
Make it go away

The Pain!
The Pain!



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Toerag
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Ala bam a
1 posted 2002-05-30 03:00 PM


Interesting poem...(I thought it was about Balladeer).....
Hopeless Romantic
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since 2002-05-22
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2 posted 2002-05-31 09:40 AM


thank,and no wasn't. It's about anynone who can't help someone they love,no matter how hard they try.
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