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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-05-30 02:22 PM



I have it all planned out,
my last moments with you.
I will tempt you with taste,
perfect my tease of dance
enticing the joining
of two bodies close,
and with one kiss
you will take away my breath,
willpower gone
such is the nature of my love.

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2002 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2002-05-30 02:27 PM


Well, now that sounds like quite the night coming up!  I'd like to see that dance.....he he you're gonna be flying high before it's all over!
Interloper
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369
Deep in the heart
2 posted 2002-05-30 02:37 PM


WOW!
Is there something in the air at Passions?
This is one of the most sensual pieces I've ever read.

Lovely.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

RSEvans
Senior Member
since 1999-10-23
Posts 1147
Tulsa, OK, USA
3 posted 2002-05-31 01:08 PM


Very nice and what I've come to expect from you.
jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
4 posted 2002-05-31 01:10 PM


Wow!

Now for the ice, cold --- water.


jwesley

[This message has been edited by jwesley (05-31-2002 01:11 PM).]

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