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Open Poetry #20

The Sun Is Shining But

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-05-30 12:18 PM

The Sun Is Shining But

I think back to yesterday
as I close my eyes
while resting here.
Existence was a thing of joy,
could smell the roses
before crossing the threshold.

The delight in the warmth of sunshine
could raise my spirits,
the thought of you could raise
the wild, temptation always
getting the best of me.

I am breaking in two, a part of me dieing
for the lack, the chance, the knowing
slipping away and no way to slow it down.
The sun is shining but...
the clouds are on their way.

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

1 posted 2002-05-30 12:32 PM

Man...do I ever know this feeling well....you have put it perfectly...I hope the sun will not only shine for you but warm your heart and embrace you in its beauty....Magnificent writing...hugs

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

2 posted 2002-05-30 12:48 PM

With your sweet smile and looks, you should be casting shadows at midnight gal...

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

3 posted 2002-05-31 06:26 AM

Maureen darling girl this is utterly utterly perfect, do I like it? I love it your words are so beautiful, they cover my soul with wonder. You are an amazing writer and your images are simply divine. This is truly amazing the building up of a heart soul and love, before they seem to disappear, as always you’ve painted the picture so well. I love this utterly

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Absolutely perfect poetry

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2002-05-31 06:33 AM

Maureen
This is a very sad write. A brief but effective summation of the love in your life.
Written down in melancholy beauty.
Like Mark Knophler wrote in one of his songs....."There's always sunshine after rain"
Sunshine will shine on you again kiddo just you wait!!

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