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Hopeless Romantic
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since 2002-05-22
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0 posted 2002-05-30 12:00 PM



   Never more relaxed

   Waves crashing
   Wind blowing threw my hair
   Sand beneath feet
   In beetween my toes
   Never more relaxed
   Never more at home

   The oceans sounds make a beautiful meoldy
   The sunset bursting with Amber, voilet
   Palm trees casting a never ending shadow
   Never more relaxed
   Never more at home
  
   Dolphins jumping in the distance
   Looking up at the stars
   And seeing every one
   Never more relaxed
   Never more at home

   Cherishing this time wiht only my wife
   Never more relaxed
   Never more at home
   Always a feeling of bliss
   ________________________________________________
   Dream lands may seem out of reach but try with your heart and you will reach it.

© Copyright 2002 Hopeless Romantic - All Rights Reserved
Startime
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since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918
Canada
1 posted 2002-05-30 12:02 PM


this poem is wonderful and it relaxed me just to read it....the perfect setting to dream dreams....

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2002-05-30 12:02 PM


This sure made me feel relaxed as I read it! Very nice word pictures throughout!
Enjoyable reading!

Neala
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since 1999-08-21
Posts 262
Florida, USA
3 posted 2002-05-30 01:29 PM


Ahhh how cute....you love the beach too much!
-Neala

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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2002-05-31 09:19 AM


Now I'm sooo relaxed ... zzzzzzzz


Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

[This message has been edited by Interloper (05-31-2002 09:20 AM).]

Zinsser
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since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641
Calif.
5 posted 2002-05-31 09:35 AM


Very nice......
~~ Connie ~~

Mistletoe Angel
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since 2000-12-17
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Portland, Oregon
6 posted 2002-05-31 10:13 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo beautiful, sweet friend, I too love the sights of the ocean and every sun that rises and sets to imbue the magic of the world! (sigh) This is breathtaking, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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