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ethome
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0 posted 2002-05-30 07:34 AM



in the bright sunlight
in the moonlight or the darkest night  
I know you're right here by my side
to share your dreams with me.

I left home to seek
the answers to my destiny
and that's where I found you and me
searchin through a world of time.  

Chorus:
you were young and you were free
you got deep inside of me
and you sailed upon my heart with wings of love
you were lonely you had needs
and you saw your face in me
and you sailed upon my heart with wings of love.

as the days pass by
I nest your wings upon my heart's desire
and make your love my special pride
the essence of our dreams.

Chorus:
you were young and you were free
you got deep inside of me
and you sailed upon my heart with wings of love
you were lonely you had needs
and you saw your face in me
and you sailed upon my heart with wings of love.

The role of poetry is to utter the un-utterable; to open up
spaces of consciousness and resistance; to language oppressions; to
re-language historie

© Copyright 2002 Eric Lewis True - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2002-05-30 07:45 AM


ethome,
you were lonely you had needs
and you saw your face in me
Prophetic words. Enjoyed

ethome
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2 posted 2002-05-30 07:49 AM


Thanks Seymour! Glad you could read this!
Janet Marie
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3 posted 2002-05-30 08:01 AM


in the bright sunlight
in the moonlight or the darkest night  
I know you're right here by my side
to share your dreams with me.
========================================
Chorus:
you were young and you were free
you got deep inside of me
and you sailed upon my heart with wings of love
you were lonely you had needs
and you saw your face in me
and you sailed upon my heart with wings of love.

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E-babes...I can hear Van singing this one
love the ethereal spirit of this..and the imagery.
Very cool song Eric ... you are the music man


Mistletoe Angel
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4 posted 2002-05-30 08:17 AM




(big hugggsssssss) Awwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, I know you will always make your love so happy and lucky when you sing these gorgeous songs to her, you always have the music flowing in your loving heart! (sigh) This is beautiful, I LOVE IT, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful hyeart, sweet Eric, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2002-05-30 08:24 AM


This is nice ethome...one of my favorites from you...James
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2002-05-30 08:52 AM


you were lonely you had needs
and you saw your face in me
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Eric, may I just say I love this?!
Cause I do!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

ethome
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7 posted 2002-05-30 09:07 AM


Janet....always love to hear from you!! Your comments are so encouraging! Thanks for taking the time to read and give me your input......your words are VANtastic!

Noah I want to thank you for your kind and positive comments....Much appreciated!!

James thank you for the reply glad you liked this!

Enchantress I am so pleased that you were able to read and enjoy this little love poem....thanks!

Interloper
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Deep in the heart
8 posted 2002-05-30 10:09 AM


I love the lyrics ... why can't I hear the music

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

ethome
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9 posted 2002-05-30 10:13 AM


Interloper...It's there you just have to listen real hard....thanks so much for the comment!
Martie
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10 posted 2002-05-30 10:24 AM


Eric

A love song is even better than the blues...beautiful in thought..and I could hear the tune in that chorus.

Hopeless Romantic
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11 posted 2002-05-30 10:56 AM


  I enjoyed it very much
ethome
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12 posted 2002-05-30 11:24 AM


Thank you Martie
I sure appreciate your comments as always!

Welcome to Passions Hopeless Romantic. If you live up to that name you will fit in well here!! Thanks for the comment!

Dark Stranger
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13 posted 2002-05-30 12:13 PM


et, enjoyed this
cool tunes

Startime
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14 posted 2002-05-30 12:19 PM


*sigh* your words sing to the heart...I love the whole feel of this poem, dear friend...hugs...

Love I leave with you whether it is in your life now or yet the essense of your dreams.

Midnitesun
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15 posted 2002-05-30 02:12 PM


"I left home to seek
the answers to my destiny
and that's where I found you and me
searchin through a world of time."
Wow. May I keep this one, please?  I would love to hear this one, sung by you.
Thank you for sharing this exquisite love song.  


ethome
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16 posted 2002-05-30 02:22 PM


Thanks DS I'm glad you enjoyed!

Karen....How nice to hear from you...thanks for the kind words!

Midnite! Thanks for the comments and I'd like to sing it but I don't think you'd hear me!

catalinamoon
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17 posted 2002-05-30 08:42 PM


This is a beautiful heart song.
Sandra

jwesley
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18 posted 2002-05-30 08:47 PM


Gee...I heard the music but never heard the lyrics....(just kidding) maybe if Interloper and I got on the same train we hear the whole thing.... neat wite, my friend...enjoyed.

jwesley


ethome
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19 posted 2002-05-30 09:36 PM


Thank you Catalinamoon and James I appreciate the kind words so much!
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
20 posted 2002-05-30 10:18 PM



Ok.  So book passage to Kansas, I'll find a
cute little place for you to set up the
guitar, Man...and you will have SUCH an audience...

ethome
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21 posted 2002-05-31 05:32 AM


OK I'll book the passage but you have to find me a band to back me up! Can ya do it?!?
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