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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2002-05-29 11:01 PM


Whenever you feel down,
Have you thought of me?
I just want you to know that
Whatever happens in your life,
I will always sail with you.

No matter what comes in between
Us we will find a way
To set on and sail again.

On our way, there may be storms,
But as long as we are one,
The sun won't be far away.

Whatever on your mind,
Please pour out to my cup-
Let me drink all your tears.

Lead against my shoulder,
Let your head fall on mine-
When the storms frighten you,
You know I'm always by your side.

Know that whatever happens
We are in the same boat-
There are only you and me,
To depend on our life.

I have fears, too,
But when I look in your eyes,
All fears fly up to the sky.

CHORUS:  You’re the origin of my inspiration
         To my music, and directions.
         Without you, I’ll be lost in the sea.
                      
         My love, don’t you know that
         You are all I need.
         I feel completeness
         When I’m with you.

When you’re alone
Do you think of me?
Do you love me still
And care for me like I do?

Sometimes when we sit
Beside each other at ease,
I would like to hear you say…

CHORUS

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

© Copyright 2002 Eliza Simmons - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-05-29 11:12 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Eliza, I am sure that your love thinks of you so very much and wherever he is, he does think of you and there will come a day soon when loves joy will always fill you! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, God Bless You, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

aries_luv_ppl
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2 posted 2002-05-29 11:57 PM


I know he loves me.

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2002-05-30 06:34 AM


Loved reading this...one of my favorites from you...James
ethome
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4 posted 2002-05-30 06:38 AM


Very pretty all the way through!
Ivy Rose
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5 posted 2002-05-30 06:43 AM


BEAUTIFUL SONG!!!! Speaks to the heart and soul...tells the story of your journey into love.  ***Ivy Rose
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