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Logan
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0 posted 2002-05-29 07:58 PM


Take me up in soaring flight
on glossier wing of sheer delight
Carry me far to great beyond
of hidden mists and magic wand

Over seas and waving plain
hidden valleys or pirates Main
Leave behind realities door
with all the problems of life galore

Wrap me with the touch of love
with the brightness of sky shining above
A fantasy of life the soul does crave
the spirit of freedom that you gave

Are you a phantom or are you real
as you take up my hand in gentle feel
Is it only a dream of the dark late night
no, it can’t be, for you are in my sight

So with a smile and look from eyes
take me up to the very skies
For forever comes to chosen few
as life begins in tender anew



© Copyright 2002 Logan - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-05-29 08:04 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, may you and your love forever soar on wings of love and find paradise and comfort in heaven here on earth! (sigh) This is soooooo lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Logan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-05-29 08:21 PM


So with a smile and look from eyes
take me up to the very skies
For forever comes to chosen few
as life begins in tender anew
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Ah dear Logan, how you made me smile with this one tonight!!
Climb aboard my magic carpet and we shall soar
above the clouds without a care...
take my hand, we're almost there!

Magical, mystical...all the ingredients I love.
Into my library this keeper goes.
*A sigh, a smile, and a gentle hug*

Sunshine
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3 posted 2002-05-29 08:26 PM


quote:
Are you a phantom or are you real
as you take up my hand in gentle feel
Is it only a dream of the dark late night
no, it can’t be, for you are in my sight

And where have you been, storyteller?  We've needed a stick on the fire, it's been too long since the last one, and the embers were asking for more glow...

Martie
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4 posted 2002-05-29 08:32 PM


Logan

You will have a long line of lovely lasses with their hands out ready to go with you...I'll be one of them.  Hugs for this enchanting poem.

Martie
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5 posted 2002-05-29 08:38 PM


forgot the library thingey...
1slick_lady
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6 posted 2002-05-29 08:41 PM


the whole thing is stunning
but my fav line is.....

"as life begins in tender anew"

GOD it is just beautiful...helen


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7 posted 2002-05-29 08:55 PM


Logan,  I think this poem just put more
glow to Sunshine's fire....

And mine and a few others...

Superb!

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8 posted 2002-05-29 09:42 PM


"Over seas and waving plain
hidden valleys or pirates Main
Leave behind realities door
with all the problems of life galore"

That really soars!

Janet Marie
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9 posted 2002-05-30 03:14 PM


Wrap me with the touch of love
with the brightness of sky shining above
A fantasy of life the soul does crave
the spirit of freedom that you gave


Are you a phantom or are you real
as you take up my hand in gentle feel
Is it only a dream of the dark late night
no, it can't be, for you are in my sight

So with a smile and look from eyes
take me up to the very skies
For forever comes to chosen few
as life begins in tender anew
=====================================

so where does a moth book her flight?
Logan...this is poetically lovely as it gets...a cadenced kissed gem from your gifed pen.

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Deep in the heart
10 posted 2002-05-30 04:48 PM


forever comes to a chosen few
as life begins in tender anew
===============
I love it.  Wonderful piece.

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Corinne
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11 posted 2002-05-30 10:38 PM


Lovely stuff, Logan, hon.

Metaphysical or real work soaring?

What have you been up to lately?

Cor

ethome
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12 posted 2002-05-30 10:46 PM


Logan
This poem really does soar with super uplifting lines....good write!

Sunshine
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13 posted 2002-06-01 07:43 AM



Needs to fly again,
as well as placed gently
on library shelf...

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with you
14 posted 2002-06-03 11:05 PM


Oh this is so beautiful!

"A fantasy of life the soul does crave
the spirit of freedom that you gave"

love that line!!

Suetang
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15 posted 2002-06-03 11:11 PM


Hello Logan

Your words always send me soaring and I have always loved the way you write.  Your words always bring a gentle calm and are filled with love from a very special heart.  I hope things are fine with you.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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