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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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He comes to me in dreams again as real as anything could be His kiss a memory no more Those crystal eyes I clearly see. His hands start fires in my soul this voice, the one I always hear He holds me, never to release no longer are there endless tears. Where does he go when I wake up? So suddenly I lose it all He's gone, I cannot make him stay my heart, thus broken, once more falls. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
catalinamoon Oneday you'll wake up and he'll be there. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
One day Sandra....it won't be a dream.  ~Hugs to you sweet lady~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big huggsssssss) Oh Sandra, I know just how you feel, I am in love with the most beautiful girl I could ever dream of, Joanna, and this last week I have missed her even more for I haven't seen her on-line and I just want to tell her when she's on how much I love her and for her to echo it back! (sad sigh) Hang in there, sweet friend, with a golden heart like yours love is bound to come to your heart so very soon, I just know it will, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Sandra, You share such a magnificent dream with us through your poetry... One day...he will ride into your life and forever be with you as you dream... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Cat, absolutely, beautifully, done. And as long as the dream is alive, reality, though out of sight maybe, also lives. The heart must have a goal in order to survive and the beauty of a heart with a dream like yours touches the lives of so many; inspires them to dream themselves. May your dreams become reality, my friend, and may your reality be more than you've ever dreamed. jwesley |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Thanks for such meaningful responses, everyone. It feels like not so many people read my poems lately, so I so appreciate those who do. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I ALWAYS read yours, CAT, though because of time contraints, may not reply...but I do try. jwesley |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Thanks James |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I read all your work whether you like it or not! Time, my dear. Time is the answer Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Lady, you say so much in three stanzas...it amazes me everytime. ........Wow........ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I will always read you my friend. . . for you know the heart. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I believe timing is essential...for now at least you have nice dreams...and someday those dreams will come true...James |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Where does he go when I wake up? So suddenly I lose it all I think that's why the mornings seem to be the hardest time, ya know? Desperate for changing |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Those dream lovers obviously can't be trusted. Seriously this is a clever write about the sensation of loving one in your dreams. I enjoyed the read! |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Hello my friend, I believe that dreams are the invitation of the universe that allow us time to ready. Sweet dreams. ThisDiamond |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Dear Sandra, you always say what you have to say in words that speak to my heart.. so glad to be back and so glad to see one of your poems as the first one I am replying to.. always, Pepper Pepper |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Damn, don’t you just hate it when you wake up???? Though, I dream as much in the waking world as the sleeping one. My mother always used to say I had my head in the clouds!! (hey not a bad place to be!!) Everything is possible in the game of life |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
He comes to me in dreams again as real as anything could be His kiss a memory no more This really hit me hard, Sandra.... When I woke up this morning, I had been dreaming about my first husband...and then when I woke up....he was gone. I kept trying to get back into that dream again but couldn't. It was just 3 years ago last week that he died, so he has been on my mind a lot lately. But like you, I wonder where he goes when I wake up? Indeed, I wonder where he is right now.  ~ dreamy hugsLyra |
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