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aries_luv_ppl
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0 posted 2002-05-29 04:09 PM


I'm a train who run
along my track everyday,
an athlete who can race
continously around the track.
Though some think routine is boring
and practices are endless,
I continue to run
as though I'm running for survival.
Along my way, I meet new faces everyday.
I recognize same old passengers.
Some run with me for a while before they run off;
some pass me by without a word.
I'm excited about changes of the landscape.
One may not notice the difference
unless the person compare the view ten years ago.
I recognize some familiar outlines of the city;
and whenever I gaze at them, I've new feelings.
My body and mind grow in understanding
with the outlines and passengers
that I see and I meet
when I run along the track
everyday.

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

[This message has been edited by aries_luv_ppl (05-29-2002 10:52 PM).]

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1 posted 2002-05-29 08:57 PM




(smiles) And wherever you go, may you always be greeted by many friends and family and others who will always greet you as a friend as you continue to run down the tracks of life! (kiss on cheek) This is awesome, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Eliza, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

aries_luv_ppl
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2 posted 2002-05-29 09:23 PM


thank you Noah I'm glad to have Passion Forum as one of my station in life. Bless you Noah, you always have a good heart

Eliza Simmons
~Flower lasts so an hour, yet spring will brings her back to life again.

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3 posted 2002-05-29 09:27 PM


You have to run fast these days, life itself is like the landscape, changing so rapidly. Well done, dear friend. (One tiny typo to fix, gaze, not glaze.)
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