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Open Poetry #20
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Tim
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0 posted 2002-05-29 08:02 AM


The night was bright with Luna's light,
...a calm on land did lay,
As golden sheen of midnight moon,
...fueled firmament's display.
Pale glow of stars fell soft as rain
...upon the earth below,
Joined with the moon in heaven's bloom
...in splendor to bestow,
Angelic grace; the world encase,
...in star's shine opaltine,
Sweet welkin's song of midnight's long,
...glows soft the night divine.
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1 posted 2002-05-29 08:11 AM

Oh did I love this!  Such an absolutely beautiful picture with so few words.  Saved this as a real favorite.

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Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2002-05-29 08:20 AM

Tim,
Nicely done, very smooth.
Nan
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3 posted 2002-05-29 08:40 AM

Your poetic visions light up the darkest nights, m'friend..
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