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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Naiveté I’ve wondered through the near and far Used infra red and some radar. Searched wondering iconoclast Dug very deep into the past. And still I cannot find my soul And know that time has set a goal. It haunts me with a phantoms rage That cannot pass a limits cage. And never have I puzzled more To open up this limits door. And know that there will come a day When I must leave and cannot stay. I’ve read of all the sage I know It is a gentle wind they blow. They exercise a gentle plan They say to be a gentle man. And this I’m getting to believe The more I learn the more naïve. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
How true... The more we know, the more there is behind the knowledge... Great thoughts, sweet and gentle Sy..  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, Thank you sweet birthday girl.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
sy, cooool stuff amigo enjoyed it |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
"And still I cannot find my soul And know that time has set a goal. It haunts me with a phantoms rage That cannot pass a limits cage." "I’ve read of all the sage I know It is a gentle wind they blow. They exercise a gentle plan They say to be a gentle man. And this I’m getting to believe The more I learn the more naïve." i am always i awe when i read your words...helen |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Sy, Enjoyed my morning read so much! Wonderful wise words here. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Your soul is hiding in the park Tinkerbell sits with it in dark waiting for you to come and find a hide-and-seek there in your mind she knows, she glows! a secret bright so tell Randy to take flight your soul is there, in corner dark and Tinkerbell's ready with her spark... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
"I’ve read of all the sage I know It is a gentle wind they blow. They exercise a gentle plan They say to be a gentle man.   WOW!!! Oh Seyour, I know just how you feel, sweet friend, it does seem crazy but I believe this is true, for to hold onto innocence and be gentle in nature is how we grow ever wiser to another sneeds and harmonies and be judgmental! (sigh) This is excellent, sweet friend, your views always amaze me, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Seymour, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shie upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Dark Stranger Thank you my friend. Helen, And thank you dear. Enchantress, Hugs back. Sunshine, And how could that be without your sunshine?  Noah, Always enjoy your comments. [This message has been edited by Seymour Tabin (05-29-2002 09:20 AM).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Seymour darling boy moi voici mon cher ami, whoops….. sorry here I am again my dearest friend, and yet again your wisdom sinks into my soul like the cooling balm of after-sun sinks into my skin after sitting in the gazebo enjoying the little bit of sun we do have here. Your words like jewels illume the mind with flashes of brilliance, which carry the thoughts deep within to mellow my heart. Outstanding writing as always YOU are a fabulous writer and this is utter delight. I’m awed by you time after time, truly exquisite  Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, My rose of suppose. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy Such poetic introspection becomes you! |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
After getting my dictionary out and looking up some of these words I like this....LOL |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Toe, Your funnier when your not trying to be funny LOL Thank you my friend. |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
That was an interesting thought my friend. Now you've made me ponder my navel |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And still I cannot find my soul And know that time has set a goal. It haunts me with a phantoms rage That cannot pass a limits cage. And never have I puzzled more To open up this limits door. And know that there will come a day When I must leave and cannot stay. I've read of all the sage I know It is a gentle wind they blow. They exercise a gentle plan They say to be a gentle man. ================================== You need not read the words of now silent sage, for the soul you seek is found upon this very page. I have found it here so many times before ... the truth you've taught, now stored in archived adore. The soul of Sy shared in raptured rhyme, wisdom and truth captured in versed sublime. Poetic promises of bind ... your gift to leave behind, moments of kind ... ink entwined in rhymed remind. Fate has a way of making us follow the plan ... if on the dawn of each new day, we do the best we can. If we treat the earth and our fellow man with respect ... then a life of no regret is the reward we can expect. If we believe that each child has its own value and place if we conceive that each will leave behind a whispered trace. The example we set will be the final act upon life's stage ... all this I have witnessed on your page, dear poetic prophet and soul sage. No ... we cannot turn back the hands of time ... this is true ... Promise me you'll find your peace in knowing all we learned from you. ~~ dont you ever doubt the goal of your soul these pages serve proof. love you Sy-babes  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper That's a good thing to ponder. Thank you |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And still I cannot find my soul Then read your poems. *S* For as you seek, it shows... and does so with tender beauty. *S* I like this very much, Seymour. *S* |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
JM, You are an angel in disguise at least that's what I surmise. And Randy told me to be good I'm messing up the neighborhood. So thank you for the sweet bouquet and I'll behave the rest of the day. Winkiewinkie Stinky. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Suthern, That's about the sweetest comment anyone could offer. |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
And still I cannot find my soul And know that time has set a goal'' I am still searching for mine too....beautiful words SY~ Lauren~ I would rather have one breath of his hair, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Layren, Thank you dear. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sy Just came back to say that JM's reply said it all. both |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Thank you sweet, isn't she something? |
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