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EagleScorpion
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Here, Now, Forever

0 posted 2002-05-28 11:14 PM



And there it flickered, out not shining, of this hellish boor-like whining, speculating, not defining, paralyzed with nothing.

Innovating on it roasted, floasted to the unbenownsted, splosted to the un remilsted spigliy dots of whuN

Run the more renisty tide of SUN

Line the unbewoubaats, un reclankin up whua ways the blackened vacuum jet forever ever ever

Sign a whundy flazzed a bousa Dun

Rundy a rindy randy rundy run.

Spangy a wangy how tangy its banjie

Splanghy it s wanjy smile to weedsty fun di- fun

And there it flickered, sout not EINING, fluv this shmellish  fmloor mlike mlanking, poopilating, fleindy beindy , shmlanky shmlank a flumsties.

Nappie flappies!

FEAR NOT DEATH,
IT IS THE MOST BEAUTIFUL THING THAT WILL EVER HAPPEN TO YOU

© Copyright 2002 Joseph Alexander Knob - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-05-28 11:18 PM




WOW!!! Oh my gosh, I just love the creative language and inventibe word usage you used here, sweet friend, the onomatopoeia here is amazing, I LOVE IT!!! (big hugggsssssss) This is fabulous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Joseph, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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2 posted 2002-05-29 11:25 PM


this is magical, strange, yet literary greatness!  
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