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0 posted 2002-05-28 10:29 PM



Expressing this expansive thought
Pleasant moonlight bathed in gold
Sensual interpretations always sought
Filling miracles and happiness to hold

Admiring the stature of this man
Fine fair minded warrior in just dessert
Stimulating dreams return again
From beneath logic any love will skirt

Impression of the rising wave benevolent
Drowning in the substance richly dosed
Sleekest lines careful of the message sent
Fawning in the thought of blended toast

Copyright Kkh 5/28/02

© Copyright 2002 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-05-28 10:38 PM


Kathy,  this poem takes me in about three
directions of thought....and I am afraid to
say which one...cause I might get it wrong..

Forgive my dense mind....Oldtimers disease..

Very well composed...as your poetry always
is....

Help me on this one,  ok?  And then I will
tell you where I headed with it...

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2 posted 2002-05-28 11:03 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, this is soooooo very lovely, sweet friend, may you always raise a toast and celebrate loves true happiness together, this is gorgeous, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-05-29 04:13 AM


snapshot of imagination - that's how this caught me. I like the idea.

Chris

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