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Hallucination
Member

since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

0 posted 2002-05-28 10:09 PM

Hi, folks...Here's a new one, there may be spelling errors in it, because there are some words I can't spell though I can pronounce (had to look this one up too) them.
I hope you can get the picture anyway...
Best Wishes,

Brian.

"Relationship from Hell"
© 2002 Brian Eggertsen, All Rights Reserved

Verse 1:
Well Jenny and Frank met about four years ago
At a local pub downtown called "Two Hearts"
They both got all sucked in by a convertation
They really hit it off right from the start

Verse 2:
Frank was the typical high-school football hero
All musel, no brain, teenage liquor head
Jenny was a middle class girl of just few words
"A sleeping beauty" her mom always said

Hook 1:
She wrote in her diary that
Her life's finally going well
Little did she know she was caught
In the relationship from hell

Verse 3:
He treated her nice for awhile but then it stopped
He began coming home drunk and dirty
Then for no apperent reason he abused her
And send her a mile down suicide street

Verse 4:
Woke up with a scream one night all covered in sweat
Got to get away from this haunted house
Opened her night dror, grabbed a magnum 44
She loaded it, "goodbye" no guilt, no doubt...(Bang)

Hook 2:
She wrote in her diary that
She's finally free from his cell
'Cause she realized she was stuck
In the relationship from hell

Bridge
Now she's running from the law
But there's no more tears
No more anger and pain inside
Now there's no more fears
She's once and for all living her life
And burried the relationship from hell...

Hook 3:
She wrote in her diary on
That subject there's no more to tell
She kind of found a shortcut out
Of the relationship from hell

Tag:
She's once and for all living her life
And burried the relationship from hell...

[This message has been edited by Hallucination (05-28-2002 10:10 PM).]

Christopher

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-02

Posts 8296
Purgatorial Incarceration

1 posted 2002-05-29 04:14 AM

lol - ok, i had to laugh at this - Relationship/s From hell are like the definition of my life... one can hope though, eh?

angelswing
Senior Member

since 2000-02-10

Posts 705
United Kingdom

2 posted 2002-05-30 09:26 AM

Ha ha ha ... Have you by any chance been listening to Aerosmith - Jainie's got a gun ?
Joking aside; I enjoyed it, I think we all know what this one feels like ... well not literally the shooting obviously, god damn it, I've incriminated my self now *mental note* 'when in hole stop digging' .
Great song/poem .
L.of.L. Tom .
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX

'There is only a very thin line between genius and insanity, this is measured only on sucess; I am proud to be considered an under-achieving genius'.

Neala
Member

since 1999-08-21

Posts 262
Florida, USA

3 posted 2002-05-30 11:29 AM

::runs in gets guitar:: I liked it, it made me wanna play.
-Neala

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2002-05-30 11:30 AM

Good story....I enjoyed reading it!

Startime
Member Ascendant

since 2000-10-03

Posts 5918
Canada

5 posted 2002-05-30 12:00 PM

WOW

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