navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #20 » being
Open Poetry #20
Post A Reply Post New Topic being Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Sven
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2002-05-28 04:17 PM


in shades of even, I find myself again
listening to the night
the whispering stars
       the questioning moonbeams
              the profound shadows
pieces of Midnight that wait to
       be put together by
              a phrase of spirit

I stand among the light
here, where streams of amber
       give way to streams of white
and I wonder what I can find
       in the florescence of it all

what will I find in revealed light?
will it be something that I can hold onto?
something that will speak to me
                                 through the luminaria?
or, will it be something more?

               something like
                                being

--------------------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

© Copyright 2002 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
RMW
Senior Member
since 2001-03-21
Posts 1424

1 posted 2002-05-28 04:22 PM


Sven ... I love the transition ..."..where streams of amber..." Well done. Bob
Magnus
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA
2 posted 2002-05-28 04:44 PM


Excellent questions...and superbly written
poetry...thank you Sven...

Enchantress
Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2002-05-28 04:51 PM


what will I find in revealed light?
will it be something that I can hold onto?
something that will speak to me
                                 through the luminaria?
or, will it be something more?

               something like
                                being
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Sven, incredible writing...just incredible.
Enjoyed so much this afternoon.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
4 posted 2002-05-28 05:06 PM


Sven,
Very good, enjoyed the read.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2002-05-28 05:36 PM


Like this Sven...James
tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
6 posted 2002-05-28 11:03 PM


Sven~
Beautifully penned my friend, well done. I enjoyed this very much
~HUGS~
Tracie

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Mistletoe Angel
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Empyrean
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon
7 posted 2002-05-28 11:06 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love the wonderful mystical feel behind these words, sweet friend, may you find light and pure comfort within the light always and bathe in the spiritual joy it offers! (sigh) This is marvelous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sven,. thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

rwood
Member Elite
since 2000-02-29
Posts 3793
Tennessee
8 posted 2002-05-28 11:47 PM


Oooooo...you are speaking my language! Love this piece of pondering and yes..being is it. Love where this ends up.

Sincerely,
Reg

Cloudishness
Junior Member
since 2002-05-27
Posts 15

9 posted 2002-05-28 11:59 PM


Just as you have so beautifully stated
I'm sure it will be something more

C
sullivan@columbus.rr.com

Tara Simms Hall
Member
since 2001-11-07
Posts 87
South Carolina
10 posted 2002-05-29 08:23 AM


Oh, Sven, this is wonderful!  I love the phrase "pieces of Midnight that wait to     be put together by a phrase of spirit". It brings a lovely visual to mind...a quilt of darkness, sewn with moonbeams and starlight.  Bravo!
Interloper
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369
Deep in the heart
11 posted 2002-05-29 10:15 AM


Ewe be.
And ewe be gooood Oh GR8 Voice of the Northland

Greeneyes
Deputy Moderator 50 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind
12 posted 2002-05-29 11:25 AM


Sven~

something like this...indeed, always such a delight to find your words graced here...beautiful dear friend....


Lauren~

I would rather have one breath of his hair,
one kiss of his mouth,
one touch of his hand
than an eternity without it.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
13 posted 2002-05-29 01:19 PM


Always, always enjoy the depths of your thought, me friend.

jwesley

Sven
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
14 posted 2002-05-29 04:37 PM


Bob, thank you. . . that's one of my favorite lines here. . .

Magnus, thank you Sir. . . I'm still working on the answers. . .

Enchantress, thank you. . . glad that you enjoyed. . .

Sy, always good to see you here my friend. . . thank you. . .

James, thank you my friend. . .

tracie, I'm always glad when I write something that's enjoyed so much. . . thank you. . .

Noah, yes. . . mystical. . . something tells me that you know exactly what I'm talking about here. . .

Reg, I've always known that we speak the same language. . . . . . glad that you liked. . .

Cloudishness, first of all, welcome!!  and I hope that it will be as well. . . thank you. . .

Tara!!  Hi there. . . yes. . . you've found it exactly. . . I just need a loom now, and I'm all set. . . good to see you again my friend. . .

Interloper, eye b knot as good as ewe oh Great Voice of the Southland. . .

Lauren, the delight is all mine when I find such wonderful words of enjoyment my friend. . . thank you. . .

james, it would seem that, at times, we think the same thoughts my friend. . . thank you. . .

----------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Severn
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704

15 posted 2002-06-01 10:35 AM


Sven, I really like this. I really do - like a..hmm..gentle rain fall in some way..

cool!

K

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
16 posted 2002-06-02 06:22 AM


I like!
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
17 posted 2002-06-02 07:08 AM


Sven.... I speak to you through the luminaria....."Good Sven, good young man.......you have just evolved into being!"
Nice to have you here!

walker
Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240
Florida
18 posted 2002-06-02 10:45 AM


I love it.
Saunni
Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia
19 posted 2002-06-02 11:24 AM


John, this is incredible if I must say so! You always write in an awesome mannor.

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

Sven
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
20 posted 2002-06-03 04:41 PM


K, thanks. . . yes, that's one way to see it. . . a way I never thought of. . .

passing shadows, I'm glad!!  

eric, I can hear you my friend. . . thank you. . .

walker, thank you!!

Saunni, you can say so. . . but . . . well, see??  thank you. . .

--------------------------------------------------------

To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #20 » being

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary