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craigrk
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0 posted 2002-05-27 11:11 AM


  

‘great art is inspired
by the sub conscious’ –
she lay naked on
the pink comforter
sipping Pastis and water
head propped on her palms
a tiny glowing sphinx
reading poems
with Cleopatra lips

knees at her waist
half listening
knowing the words
molding child-like
cleavages with id
tracing illusions
in firm tan sand.



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Gaia
1 posted 2002-05-27 02:12 PM



‘great art is inspired
by the sub conscious’ –

And the reverse is equally true.

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2 posted 2002-05-27 04:01 PM


Like this...James
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3 posted 2002-05-27 05:00 PM



A delightful beginning...

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4 posted 2002-05-27 05:07 PM


i hope you have many more of these
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5 posted 2002-05-27 05:12 PM




(sigh) Wow, I couldn't agree with you more, I believe that the most amazing art one can unravel is dwelling in the subconscious and finding romanticism and beauty within! (sigh) This is amazing, sweet friend, I just love the way you think of things, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2002-05-31 02:52 AM


This is fantastic, looking out for more..
BluesSerenade
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7 posted 2002-05-31 02:57 AM


You painted and outstanding pose,
so life like and all!!  
This was really good!!!

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