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Desert Trek |
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craigrk Member
since 2001-12-23
Posts 123
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Transcending trainees trail our trio awed by its regal mystery – repressing passion in arid nausea, hiking duality trails with camels and bearded earthly kings - conversing Bedouin ethics, monogamy, time journeys by association. We sip kava quietly laugh at this our evening entourage and their youthful dialect - then pause, gasp as the trail brightens silver with the Star. The Magus points west. Myrrh is in the air. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Some powerful imagery and messages here. Transcendence, duality, following stars and wise men. I have traveled alongside Bedouins. I have traveled with Muslims, Christians, Bahais, Hindus, Buddhists, Jews, agnostics and atheists. And I know of myrhh and frankinsense. But I may have to come back again to this poem, as I'm not sure my understanding is your intent. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (sigh) I too don't know if I understand what you meant to interpret in these words either but I too saw it as what Kacy said; a journey with various different angles! (big hugggssssss) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Craig, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Oh yes...following yonder star...James |
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