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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2002-05-27 09:25 AM






HaPpY BiRtHdAy


                
There's this stranger who worships
the morning and dew.
He's a lover at sunrise
of all women who
rejoice in his words
respond sensuously.

He's the Dark Stranger
and a fine poet who
rides on his "black (bike)"
and invites others too,
to come on behind him
to be in his view,
to feel all his touches
his mind's eye will share.
He'll be Hm Hm Hm years old,
but does one really care?

He's as young as his words are
and as old as his tales.
Never a dull moment,
his words never stale.
Well tomorrow's his birthday
I'm letting all know.
He'll be flying the highways.
He'll be letting "all go".
We'll be there in his mind,
traveling the roads too,
as we wish him the happiest of days,
"HERE'S TO YOU!!!"
                





"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)


[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (05-29-2002 07:13 PM).]

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Sunshine
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1 posted 2002-05-27 09:27 AM



A beautiful sunrise, a wonderful cake, what could be more enchanting than to wake up to a birthday surprise!  Happy Birthday, OWG...

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2002-05-27 09:30 AM


Maureen,
You took me for a ride on that one, enjoyed.

Marsha
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3 posted 2002-05-27 09:52 AM


Maureen darling girl OH MY! Such an outstanding and wonderful piece of writing, when you write the rainbows are enhanced with colour and the birdsong is clearer. I really love this one, and Happy Birthday DS you don’t look a day older, poetically speaking of couse

Beautiful writing absolutely beautiful, you know I love this utterly utterly it is truly exceptional


Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

Victoria
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4 posted 2002-05-27 09:54 AM


HAPPY BIRTHDAY DS..

AND MANY MANY MORE..

HUGSS

                     ~Victoria

1slick_lady
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5 posted 2002-05-27 10:10 AM


m...you are so sweet to do this....

ds...here's hoping you have an...erotic...exotic...chaotic...hypnotic...day...happy-happy day...helen

Martie
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6 posted 2002-05-27 11:16 AM


A very sweet poetic Birthday cake...and reminder to us to say...Happy Birthday DS!!!!!
Madame Chipmunk
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7 posted 2002-05-27 11:38 AM


A beautiful birthday write, Maureen...

Happy Birthday, DS

~ birthday hugs to both of you

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

PhaerieChild
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8 posted 2002-05-27 01:23 PM


Happy Birthday Dark Stranger!!!! Keep your face in the wind and the sun on your back. Have I told lately how much I love your writing? I thought not. Consider it told. Have a great birthday my friend.

There's the man I chose. There's my territory.....Shakira

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9 posted 2002-05-27 02:05 PM




YAY!!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY, DARK STRANGER, NOW BLOW OUT YOUR CANDLES AND MAKE A WISH!!! (smiles) Oh Maureen, this is such a lovely birthday dedication, sweet friend, I LOVE IT!!! May he continue to roam the interstates and backroads and inspire us with his passionate writing just as you do, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Maureen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

PhaerieChild
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10 posted 2002-05-28 06:35 AM


Bump!
SmittenKitten
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11 posted 2002-05-28 12:12 PM



Happy Birthday DS!

What a lovely surprise this is Wynter, I hope he sees it!  Hehe, I love the cake  



Your beautiful words & creativity allow me to connect with the same in myself.  
Thank you for having the courage to share yourself so that I can too

[This message has been edited by SmittenKitten (05-28-2002 12:13 PM).]

Dark Stranger
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12 posted 2002-05-28 01:06 PM


Maureen,

Thank you for your most lovely wishes
I know how hard it was for you
to keep it quiet..(grin) til now.

to the others that added their wishes..
humble thanks to you all...

SmartChick
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13 posted 2002-05-29 09:39 AM


Happy Birthday, Dark stranger!
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14 posted 2002-05-29 11:34 AM


Happy Birthday Dark~


Lauren~

I would rather have one breath of his hair,
one kiss of his mouth,
one touch of his hand
than an eternity without it.

nakdthoughts
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15 posted 2002-05-29 07:19 PM


thank you everyone, for adding your wishes...it's sometimes nice to add a specialness to someone's day.
I am sure all your wishes
were appreciated.


thanks again for reading
M

Gentle Spirit
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16 posted 2002-05-30 06:20 AM


Sorry I missed it D, hope it was great.  M~ thanks for posting.  Hope all is well.
~D~

Like a red brick,
in a white wall
somebodies brush
forgot to paint...
lonely....(as sung by Tracy Lawrence..)


ethome
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17 posted 2002-05-30 06:29 AM


I used to have a bike.....how about it....cake for me?!? No!.......
This is a real nice perspective for a happy birthday write.
I really enjoyed!

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