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Take Your Pen
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Take Your Pen |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Take Your Pen Take your pen and write my name Across your heart in passions’ flame Feel my fire igniting you On silken lips taste my dew On this blank page draw my soul Mark in the lines that are whole Take from the page this pure thought To seek what your soul has sought Without doubt colour me in Paint my eyes in shades of sin The hint of promise you see Is only a glimpse of me Take your brush and paint my lips Stroke me with your fingertips Breathe in the sense of my touch Confess to the need of such Take your colour and shade me Let your eyes feast hungrily Lay down your resistance here Yield, you have nothing to fear Marsha Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Where's my box of Crayolas?...  |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marsha, how many shades of love do I love this poem in? Let me count the ways. I love this poem yes I do it makes my heart to sing I love the words so soft and true it flies on starling wing I love the way it makes me sigh with comfort and with bliss I love the way it lift's me high as I feel the lover's kiss I love the way so many things are crowding in my brain I love the way this poem sings Again, again ,again I love the way it reaches out to touch my very soul I love your words in lover's rout that make me see the whole I love the metre and the rhyme it fills me up with bliss but most of all I love the time it recalls a lover's kiss Too many times a poets words will leave me sad and tart but your poems fly like birds they always warm my heart. Keth Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
loved it  |
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Miss T. Eyed Junior Member
since 2002-05-26
Posts 47 |
This is fabulous, I hope someone has their paint brushes and canvas ready to create a matching masterpiece. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Take your colour and shade me Let your eyes feast hungrily Lay down your resistance here Yield, you have nothing to fear I love your imagery, Marsha.... Love and Crayola... Beautiful write...  ~ shades of hugsLyra |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Marsha, As smooth as silk A drink of buttermilk A passions begot I liked alot. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwww, you paint such a lovely portrait of love with your words, sweet friend, may your love be hued in all the colors of life and may you always find true inspiration and happiness in each other! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Marsha, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Titia Geertman Member Ascendant
since 2001-05-07
Posts 5182Netherlands |
Mmmm I like this a lot Marsha, beautiful write. We're going to get a masterclass uh, then I must not forget to pack me pencil and paper  Titia A rose is a rose is a rose...I guess... |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Marsha Yet another masterpiece from you I see. Take care....Sue Suetang |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
This is my 3rd attempt to reply ... my keyoard melted the first two times What a luscious write. I have melted like a cheap candle Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
mucho enjoyed this great write marsha! jwesley |
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