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Poet deVine
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0 posted 2002-05-27 01:42 AM



Memorial Day

The old man in the uniform
Stood at attention in the street
Saluting stiffly to the flag
Marching in place to the drummers beat

Children giggled at the clowns
Teenage boys ogled pom pom girls
Men in muscle shirts drank beer
Next to the ladies with party curls

As the parade drew to a close
Laughter filled the small town air
Impatient for their picnic dinner
The watchers seemed not to care

The four men marched stiffly
The last group to be seen
One bearing an American flag
Wearing his camouflage green

Proudly they marched in step
As proudly as they had served
The crowd, weary of the parade
Not showing respect these Vets deserved

Suddenly the old man stepped out
And joined the soldiers proud
Trying hard to keep up the march
Saluting to the crowd

And then another man stepped out
Tears streaming from his eyes
And joined the motley crew of five
As the crowd dwindled now in size

One by one Veterans stepped forward
To march behind Old Glory
Each face showing pride and pain
Each held a different story

The band stopped at the end of the street
And it was silent but for the sound
Of twenty men marching together
Forty feet upon the ground

What made these former soldiers
Generations apart in age
Stand up and bear the flag they love
When heroes were not the rage

It takes a special man to promise
Allegiance, to protect and serve
Today, we salute those fallen men
Give them the respect they deserve.

© Copyright 2002 Poet deVine - All Rights Reserved
Christopher
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1 posted 2002-05-27 02:45 AM


silent applause.


JamesMichael
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2 posted 2002-05-27 04:41 AM


Well said...James
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3 posted 2002-05-27 10:55 AM


Wonderful tribute you have written here for the special men and women who have given to our country a great gift.
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4 posted 2002-05-27 11:08 AM



A beautiful Memorial Day poem....
thanks for sharing it with us, PDV

~ Memorial Day hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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5 posted 2002-05-27 11:21 AM


Quite fitting for those that have served...nicely done gal...
Nicole
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6 posted 2002-05-27 11:31 AM


...and it takes a special person to say it so beautifully.  Very fitting, very touching - this is the one I'm going to send to 'my' Vets today.  Thank you much, Sharon.
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7 posted 2002-05-27 01:29 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Sharon, this is so very touching, sweet friend, it breaks my heart to see many forgetting the meaning of this holiday when they attend parades and I wish we could all sympathize with these heroes and reach out to them more! (sigh) God Bless You, sweet friend, this is a fabulous dedication, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sharon, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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8 posted 2002-05-27 01:38 PM


Applause DeVine...thanks for the tribute and the reminder of the meaning of this day.
ThisDiamond

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9 posted 2002-05-27 01:40 PM


Excellent work, deVine one... such a great reminder that this day is about more than backyard barbecues. *S*
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10 posted 2002-05-27 05:28 PM


This is just wonderful, Sharon! I love it.
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11 posted 2002-05-27 06:31 PM


Sharon,  I am speechless,  my thoughts are
all blubbery and ...  well...  thank you
for writing such a priceless treasure.

I remember once, about two years ago...
telling my father thank you for all he and
his generation did for us...

You should have seen his eyes... That was
probably the greatest gift I could have
ever given to him....

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