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CowgirlFreedom17
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0 posted 2002-05-27 01:22 AM



The structure is of liquid.
Hot, slick, and bitter.
It's full of hurt, pain, and loss.
It can't be given or taken away.
It just fades.
It falls in rolls, burning and sticky.
It forms quickly and falling just as fast.
Clear, sleak, and shiny, it leaves a trail as it grows smaller towards its destination.
And, like acid, these tears won't be forgotten, only hidden in the cause of their falling.

Don't hold back the words you really mean.

© Copyright 2002 Melissa Calvert - All Rights Reserved
Suetang
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1 posted 2002-05-27 09:27 PM


Hello Melissa

Wonderful images you have given us.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

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2 posted 2002-05-27 10:41 PM




(big hugggssssssss) Oh Melissa, this is so very sad, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and I pray soon an artist of love wille nter your heart and vleach these tears into ones of joy and replenishing! (kiss on cheek) This is so very touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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3 posted 2002-05-28 11:42 AM


There is really much said in these few lines....great imagery and deepth
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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2002-05-28 11:47 AM


you can hide the cause
but the effect runs down cheek
disapprobation

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

SmartChick
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5 posted 2002-05-29 09:34 AM


This is so true. And sometimes, the pain seems to stay forever.
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