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Magicmystery
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0 posted 2002-05-27 12:03 PM


        
I Will Remember You midi
        
Echoes

A child from the glow has surfaced finally,
From the sepulchuric pages of her mind.
Reaching from the depths of her heart,
She sings another song for you.
I am that child, searching still, but finally near,
Looking for a harmony, a matching melody so true.

The beating of my wings draws me high tonight,
To watch again the rising of the moon.
My wings are the words in the pages of my heart.
My strength a silent wish to find a shadow soon.
Now I only hear the breeze that drives me on,
But close behind, I sense the music!
I know my shadow`s song.

Could it be my shadow that follows me tonight?
The moon has risen on my lonely flight.
Silver is she, close by my side and high,
Filling my heart with newness and her light.
I dance for joy
In the growing brilliance of the dawn.
The ecstacy for finding a shadow in her light.

©2002 By Sherry Gardner
        


Cherish the good memories past and look forward to the adventure called Tomorrow.
But above all... be kind to yourself today.

[This message has been edited by Magicmystery (05-27-2002 12:24 AM).]

© Copyright 2002 Sherry Lynn Gardner - All Rights Reserved
Midnitesun
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1 posted 2002-05-27 01:10 AM


"Could it be my shadow that follows me tonight?"
Yes, I can picture this. Good imagery!

Magicmystery
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2 posted 2002-05-27 01:26 AM


Thankyou Midnite, this has a great deal to do with the bird represented in "A song in the night" I appreciate your compliment.

Sherry

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3 posted 2002-05-27 08:39 AM


Very very beautiful my friend....
in words, music and picture.  
A spectacular presentation!  
Enjoyed this piece very much!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Madame Chipmunk
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4 posted 2002-05-27 12:59 PM


My wings are the words in the pages of my heart.

Very beautifully penned, Sherry

~ winged hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled"  Gwendolyn Brooks

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5 posted 2002-05-27 01:56 PM




YAY!!! Ooohhhhhh...I love this, sweet friend, yes, may Lady Luna always bless your heart with this light and bring the echoes of lifes spirit to your heart! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, I love your poem, the picture, and the music, it's all so lovely, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sherry, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

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6 posted 2002-05-27 05:14 PM


liked it
alterego
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7 posted 2002-05-27 10:48 PM


There's a love song somewhere in this.  I don't think I've read this one before (new?).  Quite lovely.  Sort of pulls you away up with it - really good for me to relax with it right now.

Bravo!!

Love and hugs

Mom


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