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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2002-05-26 11:38 PM

Whispers fall on my ears
as soft as falling snow
Words of love and of tears
these whispers that we know

Songs once sung in a tune
that carry in the night
Soulful cry of the loon
beneath the moon in light

Sighs born and bound in lust
of passions when entwined
Sparkling fall of star’s dust
into the eyes once blind

Lips that trail in skin’s trace
on waters of the stream
Tender hold of one’s face
together in one dream

Eyes that blaze with the flame
of ecstacy and more
Lover’s lost in their game
beyond the closing door

When the fall of one star
from heavens comes to be
Lover’s eyes in gleam are
of love when meant to see

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

1 posted 2002-05-26 11:42 PM

Super Barry!
Your writing has taken on a bit of a different syle it would appear lately...
AND I am enjoying every one of them....
I'm off to lalaland...
I can see Luna from my bedroom window,
She inspires me...so off I go.
~Nite, Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2002-05-26 11:45 PM

Thank you Nancy, pleasant dreams tonite
under the moon...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-05-26 11:46 PM

(smiles) Awwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, may you always see magic through loves eyes and may you always be touched by its joy! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Skyfire

Member Elite

since 2000-12-27

Posts 3381
Riding

4 posted 2002-05-27 01:34 AM

Now THAT is poetry

I know Karate, Kung Fu, and 47 other dangerous words

Ivy Rose
Senior Member

since 2001-12-29

Posts 1300
MA, USA

5 posted 2002-05-27 01:40 AM

Magnus...PASSIONATE POEM!!! Beautiful poetic, words that dance through the heart and linger on the soul. ***Ivy Rose

CowgirlFreedom17
Member

since 2002-05-20

Posts 82
Mississippi

6 posted 2002-05-27 01:45 AM

Beautiful...just BEAUTIFUL. I am quite speechless. Great job.

Don't hold back the words you really mean.

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

7 posted 2002-05-27 10:04 AM

Magnus darling boy what can I say except this is utterly utterly wonderful. I swear your writing gets better daily, almost hourly it has always been utterly utterly incredible.

As always to bathe in the wonder as delivered by the pen of the master of morning starts my day. I think that if my soul isn’t ignited by that special Magnus spark then it slumbers through the day, and never really gets going. Wonderful writing

Love and warm stuff
As always
Mushy

Breathe through the heat of our desire
Thy coolness and they balm
Let sense be dumb let flesh retire
Speak through the eathquake wind and fire
Oh

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

8 posted 2002-05-27 10:13 AM

enjoy your read

SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

9 posted 2002-05-27 10:20 AM

Your poems always give so much enjoyment when I read them. Thank you for sharing.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

10 posted 2002-05-27 10:33 AM

So soft and sensual, Barry. Written like a dream
Sandra

Suetang
Member Ascendant

since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

11 posted 2002-05-27 09:20 PM

Hello Barry

There is something about love under the moonlight and you have captured the feelings perfectly.

Take care.....Sue

Suetang

icequeen
Senior Member

since 2001-12-09

Posts 633
FL USA

12 posted 2002-05-27 09:55 PM

Sighs born and bound in lust
of passions when entwined
Sparkling fall of star’s dust
into the eyes once blind

ahhhhhhh... gorgeous.

You seriously need to publish a book, if only just for me

That way each night I can read a bit of it and sleep with all these beautiful poems covering me over like a soft blanket. I'm sure I'd wake up feeling just lovely every day. So, Magnus - what do you say? Pretty please? hmmm???

...and her crown was formed by the ice in her eyes

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

13 posted 2002-05-27 10:16 PM

Thank you Noah, my friend...always enjoy your
review

Skyfire...THAT is a nice reply..thanx much

Ivy....I do always enjoy your thoughts...
thank you...

Cowgirl....pleased to meet you on the pages.
Thank You very much..

Mushy dearest....thanx much from you too..
always enjoy your thoughts..  Cause there
are always tons of them....Love it!!

Vandana...thanx, as always..

SmartChick...that is what it is all about.
giving someone a smile...That pleases me..

Sandra,  I am still working on it...when I
figure out how to start dreaming it..I will
let you know...

Sue,  thank you dear one...you are ever
so kind to me..

IceQueen...would a monogram on a pillow with
a poem written suffice?....I will probably
procrastinate on the book until the 12th
Thursday of the 5th Monday or therebouts...

ThanK You very much....

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