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SmartChick
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-09-23

Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2002-05-26 02:11 PM

Feelings Inside
When love comes knocking on my door
Leading to this heart of mine
I am going to keep it locked real tight
It isn't going to get me, not this time

It only seems to stay for a short while
Long enough to make me feel once again
The love I had once before, and lost
Is one I just cannot seem to win

The love that I have always known
Never did have so many conditions
As the love I have recieved from you
Which always led to your rejections

This isn't the kind of love I need from you
I need the kind that is mine to keep
Which will give me pleasant dreams
Each night when I lay down to sleep

By Sue 5-26-02

[This message has been edited by SmartChick (05-26-2002 02:50 PM).]

Madame Chipmunk
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-05

Posts 8296
Michigan

1 posted 2002-05-26 02:17 PM

Excellent work, Sue...and excellent thoughts contained within.

~ poetic hugs

Lyra

copyright2002 Lyra Nesius

"poetry is life distilled" Gwendolyn Brooks

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

2 posted 2002-05-26 04:01 PM

I think we all enjoy love that comes without
conditions or expectations.  Most love to
receive,  yet at the same time...should give
in return.  I like a 50/50 split, though I
doubt it seldom ever works out to just that.

Excellent thoughts Sue....I hope you find
what you are asking for..I don't see that it
is too much...

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

3 posted 2002-05-26 09:13 PM

(smiles) Yes, that's right, and with such a loving heart as yours you are destined to find what is right for your heart! (kiss on cheek) This is lovely, sweet friend, I wish you the best, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2002-05-26 09:18 PM

Lovely thoughts penned here Sue.
No,you are not asking too much.
~Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

5 posted 2002-05-26 09:23 PM

SweetSuzieQ~
You are learning to open your heart ... say what's on your mind ... and it is turning out some lovely poetry~

Keep it up gal .... nice job on the formatting too~
*HUGS*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

6 posted 2002-05-26 10:51 PM

As you grow in your writing, I have come to see such great things from inside you. I admire and look forward to your views.
ThisDiamond

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

7 posted 2002-05-26 11:11 PM

I like your no nonsense point of view..the clarity is optimal

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