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Lost In The Eyes
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Lost In The Eyes |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Lost to a vision’s gentle face in eyes of kindness binding gleam Left to this moment, silken lace into the search, within a dream Dreams of two hearts and treasured souls into a fall of crystal pure of the white mount as thunder rolls Lost to a vision’s timeless endure Steps of life on hard stones of gray pauses to reflect of what is said Gentle eyes shine on lonely day Lost to a vision in slumber's bed Riding the winds of lover’s one breeze in the flow of light beyond moon Moments treasured in time to seize Lost to a vision, sheltering soon. Float the streams of two lover’s dreams hear the roaring of mighty falls crystalline pure and silky seams Lost to their vision as love calls |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Barry How do you keep writing such gentle, yet passionate love poems? You must be inspired. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
My, this is so tender and beautiful. Barry, I knight you the prince of romance  This is a keeper~Take care, Melissa~ "Poetry is not an opinion expressed... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) I truly do knight you one of the knights of Passion's Romantic Round Table, sweet friend, you are a master at love poetry and I always enjoy reading the spellbinding contributions you make! (sigh) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Barry...Barry....Barry, Now you just KNOW how much I love this! AND you also know that it is one huge *SIGH* Beautifully penned Sire. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ah Barry...a beautiful, soulful write... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Magnus darling boy this is Utterly utterly wonderful writing YOU darling heart never disappoint. Wonderful absolutely perfect poetry, YOU do know I utterly utterly love it don’t you? Of course you do. Sorry I’m late today darling heart Do you forgive me? Mushy flutters eyelashes and smiles winningly and blows a kiss for good measure Never stop writing these creations of wonderful delight they are all incredibly wonderfully beautifully written. I love this utterly utterly, it is another Magnus classic, to be kept and gazed at in times when my soul needs some beauty    Love and warm stuff As always Mushy Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
As always, you weave a golden fabric. All romance to you Barry. ThisDiamond |
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Tracey Member Elite
since 2001-08-29
Posts 2808where insanity meets breeding |
Float the streams of two lover’s dreams hear the roaring of mighty falls crystalline pure and silky seams Lost to their vision as love calls Pretty good place to be lost, I'd say!! Beautiful Barry. Everything is possible in the game of life |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
This is good writing...James |
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CowgirlFreedom17 Member
since 2002-05-20
Posts 82Mississippi |
You poetry is absolutly amazing. I feel as if I am reading famous poetry from long ago. It's so passionate and gentle. Great job. Don't hold back the words you really mean. |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
Dreams of two hearts and treasured souls into a fall of crystal pure of the white mount as thunder rolls Lost to a vision’s timeless endure Wow!!! You are awesome, Barry.... One of the things I love about this site is that I get to read so many wonderful poets and I have learned a lot from them....and you have been a wonderful teacher. ~poetic hugsLyra |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia |
Hello Barry Your writing is always so beautiful and soothing. Take care.....Sue Suetang |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Exquisite. I love your poetry so much! ...and her crown was formed by the ice in her eyes |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
I can't believe I missed this one! Man, I love your words more and more every time I read them! I'm not just saying that, either! Wow... I know Karate, Kung Fu, and 47 other dangerous words |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
quite the romantic, making the world seem perfect  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Thsi is such a nice smooth flowing romantic piece of work Magnus, tenderly delivered. Glad to see your muse in sync with your heart!! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
PS....a perfect world? Me thinks not...But sometimes it is fun to write of a dream... Thanx.. |
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