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CowgirlFreedom17
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0 posted 2002-05-25 11:31 PM


Somewhere deep within I know,
that it is time to let you go.
No more longing in this pain.
Things won't ever be the same.
I didn't want things to end like this.
There's so much about you I'm going to miss.
Goodbye sweetheart,
I'm on to a new start.
I won't forget you
But I am gone.
Deep within I say, so long.

Don't hold back the words you really mean.

© Copyright 2002 Melissa Calvert - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2002-05-25 11:38 PM


That is a very tender, gentle goodbye. Thank you for sharing.
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2 posted 2002-05-25 11:39 PM




(big hugggssssss) Oh Melissa, this is sooooooo bittersweet, sweet friend, my heart goes out to you and your goodbye and I hope soon you find all our heart desires and feel true loves spark forever! (sigh) This is sad but lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Melissa, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

"Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..."

Shakira

Tracey
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3 posted 2002-05-25 11:46 PM


Don’t ya just hate goodbyes? Possibly the hardest word in the English language to learn

If she who dies with the most toys wins, then can I have some toy boys please?

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4 posted 2002-05-25 11:50 PM


This just touches my heart. I know how hard it is to say goodbye, and how much it hurts. I am glad you are able to say goodbye.
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