navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #20 » How Can I Miss You If
Open Poetry #20
Post A Reply Post New Topic How Can I Miss You If Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2002-05-25 07:58 AM


How Can I Miss You If


I feel your presence, through time and space
'cross the sky signals, rainbows of mind.
How can I miss you if you never leave
when these golden treasures of you I find

Worded in left behind promises of keep,
in hold, your touch I dream you, to sleep.

I feel your presence when day has dawned
in the mirror of heart, centered upon each.
How can I miss you if you never leave
when you're never too far, nor beyond my reach

Worded in left behind, memories of feel
in hold, touch comes forth, my eyes to steal.

I feel your presence each evening's subside
as I climb the heavens to reach silent winds.
How can I miss you if you never leave
with your spirit in tow and my mind in its spins

Worded in left behind, skinprints to trace
my feelings of ever, from each day's embrace.

M

* was challenged to use the phrase  How can I miss you if you never leave, by bsquirrel*


"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (05-25-2002 10:13 AM).]

© Copyright 2002 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2002-05-25 08:00 AM


Worded in left behind poetic beauty for all of us to read.
Nicely done Maureen....I know the feelings and the memories!

Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2002-05-25 08:01 AM



Well then, challenge well met!

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
3 posted 2002-05-25 08:03 AM


thank you both..he was so funny yesterday, he kept saying he was leaving to go on vacation but still kept popping up on here..and I asked how can I miss him if...

anyway that's my story and I am stickin' to it  
M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (05-25-2002 08:04 AM).]

Magnus
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA
4 posted 2002-05-25 09:35 AM


Well,  keep right on stickin' 'cause I
think you said very well how can you...


vandana
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Patricius
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463
USA
5 posted 2002-05-25 06:09 PM


enjoy your read
bsquirrel
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855

6 posted 2002-06-13 08:45 PM


An altogether beautiful sentiment. Thank you, Maureen.

She said burn ... together.
-TON

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #20 » How Can I Miss You If

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary