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Quietly Heard, just because
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Quietly Heard, just because |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Quietly Heard the coming home part of my day is strictly personal the moment I bare the raiment of my outer soul and divest the coverings of strict to don the comfort of soft and gather yielding material to warm the skin and in so doing a mental seeking to comfort the inner me as well only then, after enough nutrient to feed the body, I take favored pen and stroke the feel ~balanced~ ~smooth and sleek~ it fits my hand so well and allows me to feel ~ ~ graceful ~ ~ the first time of the day that I feel like a scholarly lady of course I do not think as fast with pen as I do with keys clicking but ponder more ~ it is most rewarding because thoughts of how others would pen the next line comes to me and I visit with them momentarily here in the softness of my robed moment and visit mentally serving tea or wine, I might use crystal or plastic but no one will mind, and amid much laughter of good times yet to be shared I may even laugh out loud for a brief moment alone at this picture in my mind for there are many of you in my room just now the soft chattering of all your poetic voices cause me to relax, become the quiet soul that I really am because listening is an art and one that I might be perfect in and have perfected in as I am still the shy duck I've always been so in the comfort of my robe here in thought of all of you whom have comforted my inner me I come and write Thank You yet again, for giving me a place to place my silent voice so that I may always, quietly, be heard A brief thanks, again, for all that Passions has given to me for the last three years...and for the last two years, for giving me the opportunity to assist as a Senior Moderator, a function that has been vastly enlightening, having provided in payment new and lasting friends, and what more could one ask? To Ron, my humblest appreciation, for working so very hard to make Passions a Home for Poets, and Readers of Poets...thank you. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well I hope that's just a thanks and not a good-bye. I hope you never put down that eloquent pen of yours. I really enjoyed the personal aspect of this piece. I don't think you can stop anyway. You're addicted! I'm glad you are! |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
KJ... A most beautiful and tranquil write of one's heart and the feelings felt....some, very much the same as our own as we settle into our quiet place of poetic words and dreams. Thank You! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, The rays of your sun will always light my way  |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
Karilea~ this is amazing dear poet friend....what a wonderful Thank you, but we should thank you for all the grace, you lay upon these pages....very touching...  Lauren~ I would rather have one breath of his hair, |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Karilea, this is such a tender and quietly spoken Thank You... Almost as though someone were still asleep in the next room. Was I there with you also? Did you hear me stifle a giggle? These are thoughts I too have often had. Now pass the tea please.... Lovely write, ~Morning Hugs~ |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwww, you are most welcoe, sweet friend, you are a true delight to us all and one of the main reasons Passions is a magical place unlike no other! (kiss on cheek) This is gorgeous, sweet friend, may you always continue to be invited in by your magical muse, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Karilea, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
This is soft and thoughtful, I like the way it sort of makes me read it quietly |
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Madame Chipmunk Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-05
Posts 8296Michigan |
the soft chattering of all your poetic voices cause me to relax, become the quiet soul that I really am because listening is an art and one that I might be perfect in and have perfected in as I am still the shy duck I've always been so in the comfort of my robe here in thought of all of you whom have comforted my inner me I come and write Thank You You are most welcome...and THANK YOU, Karilea for that soft, lovely tribute to us...your friends here at Passions. ~ hugs to a friendLyra |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Thank you, for always bringing both your quill and your heart to this magical place. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ 'the soft chattering of all your poetic voices cause me to relax, become the quiet soul that I really am because listening is an art' ... and in the quiet of you we are all at 'home'~ *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea I feel like I have been gently hugged. Thank you for being you! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Martie pegged it just right...it is about the only way I can cyberhug all of you who have made the last three years so very wonderful for me... Thank you all... |
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