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ParisGrl
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0 posted 2002-05-25 01:11 AM



I miss you more everyday, I want you more than I can say
I know you say you love me but that is not enough
I try to act strong, brave and tough
The thought of not being with you brings tears to my eyes
Without you, everyday a part of me dies
I wish you could read this, then you would see, how much your love really means to me.

My dearest Lana.....I know you'll probably never read this poem but its here in case you want to sneak a peek. ;-)  I want you to know that I love you very much!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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with you
1 posted 2002-05-25 02:25 AM


this is so heartfelt and well...*sigh*
ParisGrl
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2 posted 2002-05-25 02:35 AM


Sea,

Thank you!   I'm glad you enjoyed it.

~Laura~

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3 posted 2002-05-25 04:28 AM


*smile*
ethome
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4 posted 2002-05-25 05:41 AM


Very enjoyable read. I felt your heart in this!
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