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My Heavenly Star
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My Heavenly Star |
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powerofthysword Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 116Glendale, AZ USA |
With the captivating brilliance of the beauty in your eyes Billions of stars in the heavens shine valiantly every night The compass of my unguided life would forever be thrust awry If I was to never again behold such a lovely sight At times when I gaze upward into the deep ocean of black I may witness a shooting star racing the sky with all it's glory Though it remains expressionless knowing it's days are numbered A sense of sadness falls upon me to see it tell it's final story Shooting stars can somehow relate to feelings of love here on earth I always hang my head with grief when fate calls upon them to depart Knowing they have left an impression in the time they have spent up high For their ever majestic presence has left a defining impact on my heart When God decided to create you he made the most brilliant star of all You shine brighter than the others through such an ever loving soul Whenever I begin to miss you my angel all I have to do is look at the sky The honor and grace that you portray will shine forever and make me whole Staring into the sun just makes you blind to what beauty actually exists in the sky. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Paul darling boy oh my goodness this is utterly utterly superb writing. The brilliance of the stars are echoed in this beautiful poem. It flows so smoothly, its form is utterly utterly wonderful and Oh how fresh and vibrant it is. I love this utterly well written   Love and warm stuff As always Mushy  Breathe through the heat of our desire |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
  (big hugggsssssss) Awwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, and may you always look up at the stars to find that star of love glow to your heart happily! (sigh) This is lovely, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Paul, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton "Underneath your clothes there's an endless story..." |
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powerofthysword Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 116Glendale, AZ USA |
Wow, thanx a lot Marsha! You are way too kind to me, and I do appreciate all of your kind words. I wrote this for my girlfriend that is living out of town until the end of the year, and gave it to her the day she left (my nickname for her is My Star). You are so beautiful Marsha! Staring into the sun just makes you blind to what beauty actually exists in the sky. |
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powerofthysword Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 116Glendale, AZ USA |
You are very welcome my dear friend Noah, I love all of you too, we all have beautiful hearts! I enjoy sharing my poetry with other people that appreciate it, and I have found a great group of talented poets here. Staring into the sun just makes you blind to what beauty actually exists in the sky. [This message has been edited by powerofthysword (05-25-2002 12:10 PM).] |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Yes, you are among many hearts with a lot of talent....and the family of friends that will ever treat you well.... Enjoyed this post...stars are always a very wonderful part of poetry and romance... |
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Zinsser Senior Member
since 2001-02-27
Posts 1641Calif. |
Cosmic intrigue... beautiful.... ~~ Connie ~~ |
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powerofthysword Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 116Glendale, AZ USA |
Thanx a lot Magnus for saying I have talent, I am intrigued myself at your level of talent also. I did immensely enjoy writing this poem, I had to do a lot of thinking to get it just right. Staring into the sun just makes you blind to what beauty actually exists in the sky. |
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powerofthysword Member
since 2002-05-22
Posts 116Glendale, AZ USA |
Thank you Zinsser, I do enjoy cosmic endeavors myself, the stars have fascinated me since I was a young boy. Staring into the sun just makes you blind to what beauty actually exists in the sky. |
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